Reviews for Pheonix to Arise
Nine-Black-Roses chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
this has got to be one of my truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first again the imagery is really gd in it up the gr8 work.x
Niels Stegeman chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much. Well done!
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
This is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.
Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
Good. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.

Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.
deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Wow, that was beautiful.
classic violet chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's

I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images
hann chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
wow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!
Thyrt chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
oh i love thatit was really goodgreat job
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Wow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.