|Reviews for Humble Pie|
| random-poser chapter 4 . 11/29/2005
Hi, thanks for reviewing my story. I thought i should return the favour, so here i am! U know it's wierd actually because I had read this stoy previously but never reviewed. Most likely because I never review anything due to my lazyness and fear the authors will take me for some kind of wack job. Anyway this story is really good, the first person perspective is really effective in my opinion. It gives us a chance to get into her mind. The wierd little comments you insert are great as well. Ummz yah so far the stories great. I think when you start to get into Greggo and Noli's relationship more it'll be great. Well done, give yourself a pat on the back, unless of course you are physically incapible or just don't want to. Bibi lub raNdom.
| JackieTheWarriorPrincess chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
I could already tell this story was gonna be awesome just from your author's note and disclaimer. Even if the prologue sucked (which it totally didn't!) I was gonna review anyways cuz I kinda laughed a bit at your little "riddle". Nice job.
| kazahana chapter 4 . 11/11/2005
I found your story through Proxy-Wonker's favourites list and now it's among my favourites! It's hard to find a promising story from reading just the initial chapters but I like yours once I read the 's pov is quite entertaining; she's funny but too self-centered. Greggo seems nice so far but his personality hasn't really been revealed yet. Maverick - no offense but I dislike his there be any chapters from Greggo's pov?
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
Funny...I didn't know I was the only guy reviewing this. Anyway, like your new chapter, and can't wait to see what happens next. Seems like Noli gonna dump him again... but haha! I guess we'll all see! I sympathize with you...we all have lots of stuff to do in school including assignments and projects I can't find the time to write either. Well, let's hope you write the new chapter a lot quicker because there is someone (me!) who cares! Haha!
| The Gobbler chapter 4 . 11/5/2005
Awesome! I like the way this is going... Ag, I can't wait to see what Greggo said to Joseph... or how everything else turns out. That's awesome that you're writing a book. Good luck, I hope you get it published!
| Sammey chapter 4 . 11/3/2005
Very nice. Hilarious! Update!
| ChocolateSugar chapter 4 . 10/27/2005
This chapter was awesome! You are such an amazing writer. Plz update as soon as u can!
| stanhops chapter 4 . 10/26/2005
Once again, great chapter. I really like who Greggo is now, but I still don't have a feel for his personality. Good job, and update soon please.
| Sxs chapter 3 . 10/10/2005
Wow. This is a piece of work. I've never read anything like it. You have serious talent. I haven't read too many original pieces like this and I really really love it.
Great super-long chapters to keep my in my room for a few hours is a bonus too.
Hope to see more soon, probably when school decides to treat us all nicely for once.
| kelyn chapter 3 . 10/5/2005
| stanhops chapter 3 . 10/4/2005
Absolutely love it and I can' wait to c what happens. I HATE MAVERICK or aleric...lol. I'm so glad you're going to continue his...I really do love the idea and wonder if you've based this on your personal story at all...
| ChocolateSugar chapter 3 . 10/3/2005
Yay! I love it when authors reply to people's reviews! Wow, this chapter was really funny! That girl Z seriously has a problem. She has a very limited vocabulary, and uses the word fucking a bit too much. I've heard people use it a lot, but not that much! LOL very funny chapter and really good. I can't believe that he's Gregory, even though we already knew that, but... Well... anyways really great chapter. I do hate you (not really) for leaving me in suspense! It's more like I hate suspense! Arg! Please update soon, I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, want to read more! :)
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 3 . 10/3/2005
Great and awesome story! Nice drama and smooth flow of events. A few nice twists here and there, though readers would already know from the beginning that the new guy's Gregory. Ha ha! Hope he rejects her and dumps her off real bad! :)
| The Gobbler chapter 3 . 10/3/2005
Yay! This story is awesome. I love reading it. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter.
| stanhops chapter 2 . 9/23/2005
i really am enjoying this story...please continue!