|Reviews for Heat|
| Snowflake Baby chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
raw bitter and reality. its wicked wonderful and delicou. "with the sun’s arms slung around your neck" perfection
| Tikklz chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
wow...so nice. beautiful and dirty and smelly and raw and all the things I love about poetry!
| a Cornucopia of Love chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I LOVE THIS!
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
This was pretty good. Some of the lines read like they were just there as fillers; they could use more raw "passion" or whatever in them, but pretty good overall.