Reviews for Perfect Innocence
bloodmoon15 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
oh...i liked this thingy. it was really good! short, but believable and good use of language. good description. good speech thingies. tense was fine. sweet and to the point. i like the little thoughts because they were very honest and like things that i think all the time, or at the least the WAY she was thinking them.
alsdjf chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Ooh, I get to review again! Did you even get my first one? I hope so. In any case, I'll say it again, I loved it! I think you only had a few parts where you forgot to put space between a word or two. Other than that, you're fine. And yes, the characters ARE always right _ ~Sao
a Cornucopia of Love chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
I loved this piece. I could hear the character's voice perfectly in my mind. And I loved how she felt so bad about it too after she became a statistic, heehee.

Oh, and there's a place where there's no space after the comma. Probably a typo or something because everything else is great!