that really just warmed my heart.

thank you.

way cool. It makes God seem more approachable.

Wow - that last stanza is extremely powerful. I think you may be right - I think God does love to paint the most. Just look around! -

This is so cute. It's definitely going on my fav's list. I love this part:

"God was the first one on the moon

And accidentally spilled some milk and decided to clean it up,

Which only left more twinkling dust in the sky."

Good job!

~happy writing~

I really liked this piece and couldn't help but crack a smile at "And plays thumb war like nobody’s business.". It was also great how you circled back to how he loves to paint. This was a great piece, keep up the writing.

I like your idea, and I enjoyed reading the poem, your god sounds cool.

Juliet.