Reviews for Brotherly love
Blueyes57 chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
there that should at least give the idea of spell check huh? really. use it and learn to spell

You're welcome
annayh44 chapter 27 . 9/19/2015
Awwwwwww Jesse so cuteeeee when he cant express his feelings but yeah explain anyhow but it be most blissful moment if he actually says I love you but its ok. . ahh David yup he actually missed the chance if he was being gentle while on their date. .Idiot suffer now. .anyways I hope David move on too. . Step brother & Sister yup sucks hahahaha Still Story is interesting and i like it :)
Kris chapter 27 . 7/13/2014
Stacie is a very sharp witted girl,really,her thoughts are outright humorous,shes quick 2 hav a very humourous conclution,apart from the frequent grammar mistakes i totally loved it,and jesse really didnt come out mean as when you started ,he became a total softie..twas good,i loved it
THE UGLY TROLL chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
dude, what did you mean about the pictures again...? in chapter 18 or 19 dont remember...BTW nice story you got goin'on here :P...
lololololololol chapter 22 . 12/9/2012
angelc18 chapter 4 . 4/20/2012
Hey, this story is good so far (although some editing could make it a lot stronger, if you ever had time) but I just wanted to say one thing: why is she saying that she's short when she's exactly average height at 5'4"? It seems to me that her 5'9" and 6ft friends are the ones who are out of the ordinary, not her.

Ill review again when I finish this :)
ImightBeCrazyforYou chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
I love how this story is going so far! If you have any free time, can please use it to edit this story? Its great but a lot of grammar mistakes! I'm gonna go read some more now...
veroniica chapter 27 . 12/26/2011
I love the story but the epilogue... i dont know... keke S
Rosedreamer101 chapter 26 . 8/23/2011
Hi :) i just wanted to give a suggestion- you should mark this story as "completed," that way you'd get more reviews :) i know because i was about to not read this story, but then i thought it was odd that you haven't updated since 5yrs ago XD so i decided to flip to the last chapter only to find that you did, in fact, finish :) so now, I shall read this story :D
There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 27 . 5/7/2011
aww :) this story was great

please write a sequal

love you
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I'm sorry, but I couldn't even get through the first two paragraphs. I don't mean that as an insult, I'm just telling you the truth. It seems like you have some really creative ideas and your plots is very interesting, but I couldn't concentrate on it because of your grammar. I think if you just re-read it and fixed some of your mistakes, your story could be absolutely amazing. Good luck and I really hope you aren't offended by this review.
hiii chapter 27 . 1/19/2011
I don't normally read step-brother fics, just 'cause, I'm opposed to it or something, dunno? BUT then I saw your fic had 799 reviews and I went OH I need to read and review!

so, I think that this is a really funny fic, and that you did a great job.
Natalie000000 chapter 9 . 11/17/2010

okay i am on like chapter 9 but i am confused of why all of the sudden is jessie being nice it just doesnt make since!
Natalie000000 chapter 3 . 11/17/2010

i just wanted to say that i like the way u started the story u know all the other stories are like guy falls for a girl, girl falls for the guy blah blah blah and then happy ending while in ur story one of the characters is different u know how jessie hates her so i like it and i am really excited about this story!

Dwindling Fire chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
I hope David's not a manwhore :(
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