Reviews for Brotherly love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chappie! Can I take a wild guess of who appeared when they were kissing?Maybe it was some of their family member? |
![]() ![]() ![]() yoyoyo! lol. i think your story rocks! when are you gonna finish it? i cant wait to know what happens next..and at last! ahahah. anyway, keep up the good work! jesse sounds h0t. )) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder who caught them this time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its the parents isn't it. I loved this chapter. The part where Stacie and Elana meet up with thoseguys was hilarious. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg... who is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh. is it their mom or dad? or maybe abby! haha that would surely be funny. abby would probably blackmail them or sth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter...it's funny when Stacie gets jealous...and lol lesbians? Stacie's a riot...and you're a meanie for leaving us a cliffe...but I guess your just evil like that...I bet you found satisfaction in leaving a cliffy didn't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha..pure evil! leaving us hanging like that. but great chapter, loved the ant joke, lol. and the lesbian thing, hilarious. ~Amber |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! A cliffie! Who is it? David? Grams? Eep. You'd best update soon or I'm gonna IMPLODE! Yeah, that's right, implode. Explosions are so overrated. _ Yeah, I seriously thought that Stacie was really checking out those ants 'cause you know how hot ants are, right? _ Jesse's so weird, but he's really cute, in a weird way... Hm. Mrow. Ona's unhappifying me. Oh well. She's kind of out of the picture anyway - now that Jesse's made it pretty clear. I thought that Stacie's tactic to get away from the psycho guys was actually pretty good. And darn funny, of course. I thought she was just going to tell them that she and Elana had boyfriends already, but Stacie's excuse was even better. _ Anyway, great chapter. Please, please update soon! - Lithely |
![]() ![]() im sweetcandiangel i just changed my name to reflect my feelings anyway to the chapter wtf with the ants? and who saw them plz tell me who saw them plz i wanna know plz plz plz great chapter and plz update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you're torturing us, how could you ?But I think it's Jesse's father, cause if it was her mother, there wouldn't be any sound, hell would brake loose in two sec. And yeah, Jesse is a little horny dog this one (but he sounds like he's a real good kisser, so... we'll forgive him lol) UPDATE SON |
![]() ![]() I hate cliffhangers! Aww sucky update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol u booty bumped me? haha righty then. *Booty bumps back* aha! Just wanted to say I'm waiting to see who the owner of that voice was. I have a feeling it was one of their parents. oh my. |
![]() ![]() hahahah thanks for the comment, apreciated, awsome chap. btw i couldnt b bothered to log onto my acount. Love it. oh my god they are stupid! i bet its libby, and im not too sure she'll keep a secret! but yeah i heard ur not going to be writing much more chapters, make it a good ending PLEASE!hope u write next chappy soon, hope its juicy like the last! cheers, cya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope to see more soon.. Is it mom or dad or whoever she's living with? I get confused I read too many stories. Hope to see an update soon... Love it as always! |