|Reviews for Hiring a Hooligan|
| xXxslayqueenxXx chapter 10 . 7/2
I want more Lucan.
| xXxslayqueenxXx chapter 6 . 7/2
Is...is it evil that I reh-ly want Lucan & Jane to get together? I mean, I guess Rafe is okay, but LUCAN. Oh my God. I ship JaneXLucan so hard. I love your story so far.
And THANK YOU for finishing it.
| Swati chapter 7 . 4/16
Haha I love your stories! I'm Indian too,but I've never heard of any witches but that's maybe bc I live in the south and because my dad's an atheist XD my mom is religious but I don't think she believes in witches haha
Anyways,the chapter was funny and awesome( as usual)
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/16
This chapter was awesome! And so fluffy :3 I loved the way Rafe got angry when Jane was insulted and how he cares for her :3
| LSLDFKD chapter 13 . 3/29
| Just a friend chapter 14 . 3/13
I just finished reading this over the course of one afternoon, but I must say it's the best thing I've read in a very, VERY, long time. I'm a lot in love with Rafe (And Lucan. But more of Rafe, really.) and Jane is my spirit animal. Everything about this is flawless and amazing, and I strongly suggest you get it published because I want to have this book up on my shelf. Please.
| Charlette chapter 13 . 2/28
Ugh andrew pratt is what gives us fictionpress writers a disincentive to write and post; but i hope you know how much joy reading this has brought to my otherwise boring life! Loved Jane - it's so cool how you had the discipline to actually read up on all these science facts! Also it probably helped that the Rafe/Jane pairing was so well-written. Thanks for a fun read!
| TheLittleLostEcho chapter 1 . 2/26
I am so very sorry about this Andrew Prick but please please please don't remove your work. If you do you're only letting people like him win. If you take down all your work than your killing the chance for any people still reading this or any people who will read this in the future. Any time I'm stressed I read and right now I am in a very stressful situation, but you're story has helped me a lot with handling that stress and gave me a much needed escape. So please don't let this guy get to you and force you to take this saddening action. Instead in all your stories claim that their your and you will go after copyrighted because honestly your work is good enough to publish and it would be devastating to hide them from the world out of fear.
| dog3n chapter 13 . 2/9
Fantastic. Truly original; characterisation spot on - readers feel like they are in Jane's (rather alien) head.
| OneLoneStar chapter 2 . 1/18
I'm Indian too! And I can relate to ur story a lot! Except I'm not Gujarati.
I LOVE Grandma and Mrs. Shah. Mrs. Shah is just like my mom. :)
I love all your characters actually.
Except for Connor and Katrina.
| Kelly-Green chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Did you get published? This fic is being sold on Amazon! Or it was at some point, the link to the posting doesn't work. It says the author is Andrew Pratt?
| susumiya08 chapter 13 . 12/26/2014
wow! I can't believe is over!, it was a super funny story, even when I didn't understand half the sh!t she was talking about. and, oh the way she eats, and snorts, lol it was gross, even if she was such a funny sweetheart. rafe and his irish looks were cute and funny lol, I loved his understanding nature, and abussive great mind lol. I hope suril and his family end up all right!. the grandma was awesome and bianca as well. there are not enough words for everyone's awesomeness...I have a request...CAN YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE ME A LUCAN?! 'cause he's hottttt, and smarrrrttt, and kindddd! just like rafe, but he's just for janie. if you do such a thing like a sequel, make me his girlfriend lol.
you're an awesome writer, funny and creative, I'm really angry with that fu[ker who stole the story! it's sad that people can't stand not having imagination and steals from other people. I hope you keep writing anyway. don't let sheety people fu[k with your amazing imagination
| graft chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
I suppose I can see why this is so popular, but I'm disappointed. I thought this was going to be story with adults. Kinda past the whole high school obssession thing. Also teenagers are annoying no matter how well written.
| Be My Valentine chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Jane is funny. It's her "warm turd" coloured eyes that got me.
| clara12 chapter 14 . 12/9/2014
OMG I followed you like a hopeless stalker ages ago and was sooooooo excited when i found out (just an hour ago) that you updated and completed the story! it made me nostalgic about those days when I once was a teenager, loving romance. Thank you so much for completing this story- it is definitely better later than never! I ABSOLUTELY love Jane and Rafe and hope there may be a sequel about their adventures in college or whatever! I also wish you all the best and curse Andrew Pratt to the infiinity, what f******c****. THANKS AGAIN FOR WRITING SUCH AN ENTERTAINING ORIGINAL PIECE. I will definitely not hesitate to buy this, when it gets published! THANK YOU!