Reviews for Hiring a Hooligan
Gaaras Beloved chapter 13 . 11/11/2015
This is the best story I have read ever. I started last night and was up until 5 reading. I even snuck away at work to read for a couple minutes. You are amazing, I am in so much love with this story.
rinievermilion chapter 14 . 10/19/2015
You know i did read this fanfiction i think about a year ago (only the first and last chapter because i did not understand what shit you are writing). Now I'm in second year high school and in science stream so i at least understand a 1/4 of what you are saying! Isn't that awesome.

You know this fanfiction makes my thermo receptors tranduce internal(heat) energy into receptor (generator) potentials which result in excitatory postsynaptic potentials, starting action potentials at the trigger zone of my neurons, through primary and secondary neurons to my central nervous system to give me the sensation of warmth. I like it.

In another year or so I'm gonna read this again and laugh my ass off
madamemercurial chapter 5 . 9/23/2015
Oh, my god, I'm so glad you just pull stuff out at random from texts... I've been sitting here laughing and going cross eyed trying to figure out all the math references... naturally, since i did biology in school, i had to google the hell out of everything.

Omygod i love this story...

thank you so very, very much for writing it... (I never even checked how long ago you finished this, so it might be very, very late, and in that case, apologies)

stupidsilence chapter 3 . 9/15/2015
well this is indeed interesting
I guess even a violent guy is still a guy, and Rafe's too chickenshit to tell the girl he doesn't like her even though he fights guys and sells drugs. Ahhaha..cute
$20 for pot tho? is that the going rate? huh...
can't keep up with all the weird sayings, even with all my AP classes I have to slow down and think about what she's saying and it makes for slower, a bit more difficult reading, but it's entertaining nonetheless, cute honestly
stupidsilence chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
it seems like an interesting enough basis for the story and I'm very interested in reading more.
I have to say I'm not too fond of your protagonist. She's got a holier-than-thou attitude that really pisses me off; just because you're "different" doesn't make you better than anyone else. But that's me.
Should an interesting read~
Gotta say, I love your writing style~~
Annalynn Roe chapter 4 . 9/8/2015
Two years after initially reading this and finally some of her babble I can understand!
#Knows what a Quotient and Chain rule is.
Yes. Enjoying my second run through of the story.
Melancholy Mistress chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
I just want to say without even having read anymore than the title and summary you have already interested me and made me laugh tremendously this title is hilariously awesome
Marissa 3 chapter 14 . 8/20/2015
Hi, hello, Marissa here!

I don't even have an account on here, so I never review (yes, I'm one of *those*) but since this has been LITERALLY my fifth time reading through Hiring a Hooligan, I think I should finally post a review haha

First off let me say that I NEVER re-read books. I always pick up my favorite books and re-read the best parts, but never the entire book. But seriously, three months goes by, and I find myself already wanting to read Hiring a Hooligan again. This story is so special to me. Every. Single. Character. in this story is so unique, so different than any character I've ever read before. To be able to create such special people, you really must be something special yourself. Janie and Suril and Rafe are so close to my heart, I love them dearly. Thank you thank you thank you for them :) :) :)
xXxslayqueenxXx chapter 10 . 7/2/2015
I want more Lucan.


xXxslayqueenxXx chapter 6 . 7/2/2015 it evil that I reh-ly want Lucan & Jane to get together? I mean, I guess Rafe is okay, but LUCAN. Oh my God. I ship JaneXLucan so hard. I love your story so far.

And THANK YOU for finishing it.

Swati chapter 7 . 4/16/2015
Haha I love your stories! I'm Indian too,but I've never heard of any witches but that's maybe bc I live in the south and because my dad's an atheist XD my mom is religious but I don't think she believes in witches haha
Anyways,the chapter was funny and awesome( as usual)
Guest chapter 6 . 4/16/2015
This chapter was awesome! And so fluffy :3 I loved the way Rafe got angry when Jane was insulted and how he cares for her :3
LSLDFKD chapter 13 . 3/29/2015
Just a friend chapter 14 . 3/13/2015

I just finished reading this over the course of one afternoon, but I must say it's the best thing I've read in a very, VERY, long time. I'm a lot in love with Rafe (And Lucan. But more of Rafe, really.) and Jane is my spirit animal. Everything about this is flawless and amazing, and I strongly suggest you get it published because I want to have this book up on my shelf. Please.
Charlette chapter 13 . 2/28/2015
Ugh andrew pratt is what gives us fictionpress writers a disincentive to write and post; but i hope you know how much joy reading this has brought to my otherwise boring life! Loved Jane - it's so cool how you had the discipline to actually read up on all these science facts! Also it probably helped that the Rafe/Jane pairing was so well-written. Thanks for a fun read!
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