|Reviews for Deception|
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 14 . 6/23/2006
Hooray! I see the story is nearing the climax...and it is coming along quite well. One thing I noticed, though, was that you used the phrase "Lucius in his anger" twice in following sentences (in the 3rd and 4th to last paragraphs). It has a kind of goofy feel to it, so I'd advise eliminating or replacing one of them.
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 13 . 6/23/2006
Ooh..."blood red sunset". Quite fitting.
Keep it up!
| For the Kingdom chapter 13 . 6/9/2006
Ooh! The story is rising into a climax! I can't wait to see the ending!
| For the Kingdom chapter 12 . 6/9/2006
Are you going to do something to tell a little more about Patrick O'Connell? Good chapter by the way.
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 11 . 4/24/2006
Awesome! I can't wait for your next chapter. Keep it up!
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 10 . 4/24/2006
Hmm...good way to end the chapter.
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 9 . 4/24/2006
Oh yes! :) I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time, but your story is coming out really well! And yes, I WAS intrigued by the orange eyes. "Now onward ho to Chapter 10..."
| For the Kingdom chapter 8 . 9/17/2005
Aw, they're falling in love...how sweet. As usual, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 7 . 9/11/2005
Wow, so much action! Keep it up!
| For the Kingdom chapter 6 . 9/7/2005
You're getting chapters up like a wild fire girl! Rock on!
| For the Kingdom chapter 5 . 9/6/2005
Marrissa and Matthew, a perfect mach. Great job! Can't wait for more!
| For the Kingdom chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I love that last line! It's an awesome way to say she passed out.
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Its a nicely written chapter. I just didn't understand was that the werewolf just bit Marissa?And then left?Sounds kinda redundant. didn't the werewolf try to kill her or something?Maybe you could explain that part in a future chapter.