| Reviews for Love Bites |
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  Emmy chapter 38 . 1/30/2006 woo woo! Good chappie! Cant wait for the next one. |
| Cherise chapter 38 . 1/30/2006 Oh! I love it when couples..."switch roles"! But either I've forgotten or...I probably forgot. How tall are Rafe and Dan? |
 uggabugga chapter 38 . 1/30/2006 o what does he say? and does it look like dans gonna be on top? o me likie change! |
| Ebony chapter 38 . 1/30/2006 No! It can't end there! *big tear* I was so looking forward to some awesome smutiness today. Next chapter, like soon? Please? |
| SarryMatts chapter 37 . 1/30/2006 'Bloody English dictator control' -freak' that made me laugh. You've hinted at Dan's family and past and now I'm really intrigued. I'm doubting that he's going to manage a stay in England without somneone from his past appearing and I can't wait to see who they are and find out more. |
| uggabugga chapter 37 . 1/29/2006 i loved the whole secert affair thing througout the tour and i kinda thought you would have the get caught! but it worked out for the best and the got yelled at by a suspicous wife! . Mile High Club gotta love it! lol Kelly |
| SkepticCritic chapter 37 . 1/26/2006 Ah... And you so had better find something for jake...i won't let you finish the story 'til you do...you know what would be really funny? probably not possible but immensly ironic? is if jake ended up with james...i'm sorry but i think that would be the greatest twist...see how evil i am? buahahahahahahahaha... |
| Ebony chapter 37 . 1/26/2006 Aw! I didn't want it to end so quickly! I've been waiting for this chapter too. I just adore all of your stuff even though this one is probably my favorite because it was my first love from your collection. This reminds me that I need to get hopping on another story myself but unfortunately classes have been drowning me in work. I technically shouldn't be here reading this but I just couldn't help it! *hugs*Can't wait for the next chapter! *buggars off to do some math* ~Ebony~ |
| Cherise chapter 37 . 1/26/2006 Hahaha, they still are too cute together! And I think domestication suits them! I truly love your characters! They amuse me endlessly! |
| Quietly Losing Control chapter 37 . 1/26/2006 M kippers...with ketchup. Really really nice. And...I think pilchard is actually fish. Because on Bob the Builder (a kids program for littl'uns) there is a cat called Pilchard and cats like fish...don't ask why or how I know that, I just...watch kiddy programs sometimes... |
| Emmy chapter 37 . 1/26/2006 SO that's what kippers are! Hee hee, in all the years I've been reading Harry Potter, I never knew .. lol. Hee Hee little grumbling Rafe, and I feel bad for Dan... poor baby. *Ray jumps on Dan and gives him a really big hug* *Emmy grabs Ray by the shirt, and yanks him off* Sry bout him, he's the character in my story, lol, hes my friend.. yes I'm odd, but yea, its just cool like that. So, yes, I shall be back to review with more oddness, at the next chappie! |
| Ebony chapter 36 . 1/24/2006 I just absolutley love this story. I was bored yesterday and decided to read up on and I'm so glad that I did. This chapter was unbelieveably hot. I found it really amusing when the woman couldn't even tell that it wasn't her husband in the stall. Gosh, those two totally live on thrills but it's okay because it results in interesting situations. Oh yeah, way to go with scaring the shit out of me with that car accident. I still feel really bad for Jake. He is so nice and sweet, everything you could ever hope for and yet Dan has all of that on his plate. I sympathize with Dan because honestly, I've been in that boat before having one person that is wonderful for you and yet you have another that isn't so good for you but you can't stop yourself from wanting to be with them. Yeah, it's a bitch and you've portrayed that wonderfully. I just love your work. Now I'll go check out the rest of what you've written ~Ebony |
| Cherise chapter 36 . 1/20/2006 They never cease to amuse me. Getting caught during a quickie in the toilet. Hahaha. I wonder if the rest of the crew will discover they went together and get suspicious. It's not everyday a man tells his lover he's going on trip, refuses him permission to accompany him, and brings along his best friend who he seems awful close to. |
| SkepticCritic chapter 36 . 1/19/2006 And then there are times like those when I'm glad they're together...BUT JAKE MUST FIND SOMEONE! He must...It's as simple as that...He must...no two ways about it...no ifs, ands, or buts...He must...I am admanent...YOu know...I think I spelled that wrong...Hehehehehehe... |
| Emmy chapter 36 . 1/19/2006 Yo! Fucking aweosme chapter... hee hee ... Rafe is just too cute .. he followed him! Yay! ... lol. |