Reviews for occupy me mind
Matelot001 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
What can I say? who hasn't felt this, I know I have, I still do occationally, wouldnt life be so much easier if everyone liked who liked them...

keep up the good work, and thanks for the reviews
dragonelemental chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
OK, this one sounds more like about ben than dave. Pretty good though, stop repeating urself in the poem though, find a different way of phrasing it.
Miss-Nina chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
sad, but that totally makes me think of myself. I totally crazy about (ahem), can't say the name. But I know what you mean. Awesome, and sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, Lioness.

sunday night sky chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
i can really relate to that poem... as everyone can, i think. :)
In Search of Sunrise chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Very nice! haha I liked the rythm of how you always focused on your it has a very nice flow
Meira Evenstar chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Oh, wow! I can really relate to this poem. Very good.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
i love that last poem does seem a bit cliche

and the beginning reminds me of a pirate. argh.
Ether Boy chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
i understand everything said here. its happened to me before (of course i kept thinking of a girl in my case). This has a nice little flow in it. quite good i must say.