I liked your story it was a nice read.
The only thing that annoyed me was the random use of three ?'s where they didn't belong. Other than that and the constant A/N at the beginning I enjoy this.
THANKS FOR THE READ!

-Aja

I think you did a wonderful job! But the two things that are driving NUTS are chapters 11-12. WHEN DID HE TELL HER HE WAS LEAVING?! You NEVER mentioned it! I don't understand! If your ever bored, please fix this, and I'll read it.

With that out of the way, it was a beautiful story! I'm really glad I read it. I just wish there was more flirting. Over all, you did a great job, I really liked your writing style! God bless you where you are!

-LFA JLover7877 over and out-

I love, love, LOVE this story. I cried. Really, I did. Thank you so much for writing this.

That was a really good story, well written with a very interesting plot!

I really liked the story but a bit of constructive critisim for when your writing next time there was a lot holes in the character backgrounds like for example why Darien was all of a sudden coming from Juvy to school and why he was in their in the first place woud've been nice to know

I loved this story 3

why does everyone one have brown hair but one? And thank you for putting this in the story :) it helps alot to get a picture.

So the story ends with them both happily dead. Odd, but good.

tis good

again, i love-but IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER! :) regards,

manda :)

I LOVE the chemistry between Akemi and Darien!

This was one of the most creative, imaginative, stories on Fictionpress that I've read so far! A-ma-zing. :) Can you tell that I liked it? Darien was so cute, and Akemi pretty awesome and funny too. Though it was really good, some things still bothered me: The first chapter/intro/prologue thing with basically a list of characters? Sorry if it's just me, but I don't like those; we should be able to find out about the characters IN the story, not before. Some of the parts where they spoke Japanese confused me too, because I don't speak the language so I basically had to guess what was being said with the context. Also, it seemed like you needed a real prologue explainging the pheonix thing, because other than the one in Harry Potter, I know nothing about them. And it probably could have used an epilogue that explained everything a bit more...but other than that...I loved how you used a pheonix instead of a vampire or werewolf or something. It was really unique! All in all, great story. Made me laugh, made me smile, made me cry(yes, I was actually BAWLING when Darien died...) XD

AW I luved this story... The ending wsas really sad though

I love the entire thing. I love your work on this story.

I completely love this. wow. I'm sitting here crying. ha ha happy tears though. okay at first they were pretty sad. i didn't know if they were going to be together or but i like the way you ended it. Your a great writer. I'm really glad i decided to read this story. :)