this story is really good ,

i dont get why you didnt continue it ?

it was goin pretty smoothly .

continue it , please ?

(:

Very nice story. I like how Abby has changed with the times while maintaining her own time.

Your story seems very interesting so far. I look forward to reading more chapters. :)

You have misspelled "relatives" as "realities" two of the three times it has appeared.

Poor Jonathon, doesn't even know how old his own college is.

Did you intend for both Jonathon and Matthew to have the same last name?

Well-written, interesting characters and suspicious mice.

And, of course, Plots and Suspicions. But it needs updates. *Nods wisely*

Serenity,

I like this story A LOT! I'm a big fan of ghosts and the supernatural. Keep this story going!

Nice! Please update!

Very good, I like it. Updates awesomeness. -

-Tiar

I would just like to say, I really love your story. Ever since my father passed and my best friend committed suicide, I've been fascinated by the Spirit World and Spirits. Also, I'm always compelled by a good ghost story. Keep it up. -xo

OH! COOL DUDE!

UPDATE!

you are just full of suprises! Nice suspenseful ending. alsoo I find it very interesting how johnathan can only see HER. Like some sort of connection purpose. update soon!

Hahaha..id like to spend a few days as a ghost! D It's a great story so far! Hope ya write soon!

Angie

Yay! Another chapter and it was great too, Can't waint 'til next one

xadrx

cliff hanger! wow love this story so much please write more soon! :)