Reviews for Dancing Ink
notated descant chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
a simple everyday doing, and you've turned it into an elaborate piece. I really like this one, good job!
La Gitane chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
I wholeheartedly agree with the sentiment of this poem - the pen and ink, undoubtedly - the speakers of a truth where we are only the mediator between nib and paper.

You've written the poem very elegantly too. There aren't any rhymes, and I'm not too sure how you do it, actually, but you manage to give a sense of flourish and mastery of penstrokes. Ah, maybe it's the word 'dances' - it lifts the whole poem in the middle and gives it a feeling of whoosh.

Lovley poem, despite my incapbility of reviewing it properly. :)
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Your style here is really nice, though writing about writing is, I think, rather amateure (sorry if I spelled that wrong). But really, the style is good, you might just try progressing onto more in-depth topics.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
The last set of lines is amazing...