|Reviews for Labor Day on Vashon Island|
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
long, but still great. what can i say? your poems are always great.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
wow, This is so personal, I can't help but see everything you described in my mind eye.
Well, Well, Well Done!
| Tikklz chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
I loved this is so many different ways! My own "dad issues" came into play, the need to break away and go "hunting adventure". Also, I went to visit my aunt and uncle last year, and they live in Anacortes, WA (about a 45 min. trip from Seattle) and I don't think there has ever been a place I've been more attached to, and reading this made me miss the ocean SO much! As always, you're writing style astounds me!
| Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
It could be a song. It doesn't even need music though really. It's so melodic and touching. I really felt the emotion. It's a little hard to describe, it's like that choked up feeling in the back of your throat, but inside my very soul. Very well written. Keep up the good work!
| shade chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
My my my, I really liked that for the sheer fact I could relate. My grandparents used to live on Vashon and I'd visit them and it'd always be great. Don't want to ramble. Very good.
| pale doll chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
It's Jack Dawson...
| like a lover chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I loved how I could see the events, how I could imagine the relationship strengthening throughout the day (bad choice of words, but you know).
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
This is very story like, can picture it well. Love the sentiments and ideas in it. Well done.
| Kurt Nabokov chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Thanks for the review. I'd appreciate if you'd read my fiction more than my poetry; I try much harder at it. I liked your poem: it's nice to actually read something on this site that actually has some thought.
| Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
wow...a story in poem form. Almost like prose. I like the () you use throughout, as though adding on to the thought. I could really picture this. Beautiful
| Traced In Green chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
That's a beautiful poem, excellent style and a deep relationship portrayed. It's a tad bit sad on the dad part. Thank you for your reviews and I'm so sorry.
| words music and love stay true chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
ooh! This poem is really really good! It's incredibly powerful! It almost brought me to tears it was so good! I love it! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! *shivers* the emotional power! Ooh! I love it! *****the scottish dragon*****
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
amazing. simply. amazing. keep it up keep it up!
| method acting chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
A different sort of beauty. off beat...interesting. Lovely job.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Thats a nice poem. But a Corolla! Come On!