Reviews for Try To Stay Calm
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Wow, ends with a bang, and starts with a brilliance.
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
This is pretty good; something I picked up on was you used "I" sort of repetitively in the first stanza, and the repetition didn't really work so well, so you might want to consider that. Other than that, good piece overall.