|Reviews for Spit It Out|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
I love this, the intensity of your conflict was so clear through your verses. Keep up the good work.
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
This was alright. A question I have about word choice: why moral strings? What did morality have to do with it? I'm not saying nothing, I'm just saying its a point you could elaborate on. That aside, the lines were a bit choppy. You might try blending lines together to improve the flow/overall read of the piece.