|Reviews for Sandstorm|
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
A gorgeous concept, you detail your work so expertly. Love it.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I really liked this partThe storm rises, howling from the West
A symphony to this deep desperation in me
It's just so vivid! Good job!
| Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
WHOA, thats an amazing poem. It's very powerful. I love your choice of words, also your flow and structure was awesome too. keep it up
| Mysterious Bloodbath chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Very good. Imagry is great. Images bombarded me even if they weren't meant to be there, they were.
thanks for the review!
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
beautiful.i tried writing to a certain thing and failed miserably.
hah, its great that you can write something so beautiful about just one thing.
reminds me of a desert.
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/6/2005