Reviews for Sandstorm
in theory chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
A gorgeous concept, you detail your work so expertly. Love it.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I really liked this partThe storm rises, howling from the West

A symphony to this deep desperation in me

It's just so vivid! Good job!
Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
WHOA, thats an amazing poem. It's very powerful. I love your choice of words, also your flow and structure was awesome too. keep it up

write on,Em
Mysterious Bloodbath chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Very good. Imagry is great. Images bombarded me even if they weren't meant to be there, they were.

thanks for the review!
Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
beautiful.i tried writing to a certain thing and failed miserably.

hah, its great that you can write something so beautiful about just one thing.

reminds me of a desert.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Beauitful...simply beautiful...again.
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