Reviews for Elixir of Life
lauriandall chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
very similar to others out a different theme,perhaps.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
The imagery is very exotic. Maybe its cos I think horses are cool. It maintains its depth and meaning as well. Nice piece.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I love it, I could write volumes about each verse. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
Christina Hopkins chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Well, I do get the meaning but you did put this piece under Haiku, but the format is wrong. It's really good though other than that. Keep up the good work!
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I think I get the meaning. If I've got it right, it's very well done and has great depth for such a short piece.