|Reviews for Elixir of Life|
| lauriandall chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
very similar to others out a different theme,perhaps.
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
The imagery is very exotic. Maybe its cos I think horses are cool. It maintains its depth and meaning as well. Nice piece.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I love it, I could write volumes about each verse. I loved it, keep up the good work.
| Christina Hopkins chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Well, I do get the meaning but you did put this piece under Haiku, but the format is wrong. It's really good though other than that. Keep up the good work!
| Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I think I get the meaning. If I've got it right, it's very well done and has great depth for such a short piece.