Reviews for Drown Me
staticdistortion chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Nice work. It's always cool to play with the shape of your poems.
CerriC chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
I really like the structure on this! The flow was really nice and having "drowning" written vertically gave a sense of sinking. This was great!
in theory chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
The slide of letters produces a slippery rhythm, very nice. Your bio is..neverending..btw :P
CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
I really like this poem. Very creative. Great work!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
wow, full of profound meaning and chilling imagery~~ the format was good too~~

keep writing!
Moonbeam Elegance chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
leria (review below) that was so harsh,dude,its a good piece.

i love it actually,the formatting is perfect.
youzi chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
interesting use of format here...i love shape poems, and with FP's stringent formatting i guess this is as close as one can get to shape poems.

do keep writing D
leria chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
you're making it look long when its just this teensy little the idea isn't still.
miasmas chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Yay! It rocks... I like it. Dark but good