|Reviews for The Obsession with Jack|
| ashle chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Well...that sucks. I was actually hoping to read this story, but oh well. ]
| enchantedx chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
Oh how I wish to read this story. I just found it now and was too sad to see it's removed. The summary sounds great and I don't mind if it's "bad" written, I'm sure it's good and that I enjoy it :)
If you ever see this comment would you mind to send the story to me? Only if you want ofcours, and it's ok if you don't want.
Just wish to read it *hides*
My email is:
enchantedx hotmail . com
(in case the e- mail doesn't work)
| MiranDuranDa chapter 2 . 4/17/2015
Aw, I found a link to this fic on a list of recommendations and was hoping to read it.
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 24 . 6/1/2011
Hmm. That was weird, but it made sense as well. Idk. I like Tom. :)
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 22 . 6/1/2011
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 18 . 6/1/2011
Hmm, I only just saw that coming. Tom's kind of cute though. Rosie doesn't like him very much but I think I do. And that was Tom, talking about giving him the keys...it makes sense now...!
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 17 . 6/1/2011
Oh. That was unexpected. (well, until tillie said he was trapped in his head.)
And sorry for my last review, I meant to say Rhys*
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 13 . 6/1/2011
Oh my god! Why is EVERYONE so horrible to Rosie? She's not even a bad person or anything...she just has a horrible family and a bitchy sister and no friends and Tom hanging around like a bad smell and Reece threatening her for something she doesn't understand...
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 6 . 5/31/2011
Tillie...made no sense at all. Maybe it was because, as it is first person, it made no sense to ro, but I think it was probably because she was just being weird/sad/drunk(metaphorically).
| Disney Is Hardcore chapter 4 . 5/31/2011
Hmm. Tom's an arsehole now, isn't he? What a douchebag. He can gtfo. Makes me sad though, because I love the name Tom. Oh well.
I like her personality, even though it's a shame; she doesn't really seem to have friends even though she seems nice enough; just introverted. I like that her personality isn't the exact same as ever other cliché teenager personality.
Her dad is disgusting and horrible...you managed to get that across very quickly without needing to go into too much detail, so that's good.
I'm not sure you need to put the whole lyrics to the songs at the start...I cba reading them so I just skip to the actual chapter. Idk. But that's cool.
| Spacy-Book-Nerd chapter 24 . 3/11/2011
That last bit was an amazingly horrible way to end the story. I can't stop laughing cause it's so brilliant. Took away some of the seriousness of the whole situation and so funny!
| TunglMed chapter 24 . 2/28/2011
Wow, that was a truly fantastical story.
It's so well written, clever how you get all the right details slotted in, what a perfect ending, and brilliant that I didn't even see her romance with Tom until the second last chapter.
Why does she want to keep the mp3 player though, when she's all over Jack? I feel bad for Cleo (about drinking someone's piss) but happy to see her better side!
Honestly, you write so well!
| aliaschantra chapter 20 . 12/5/2010
I forgot to say the one thing I really liked. It's the songs.
| aliaschantra chapter 19 . 12/5/2010
I feel the exact thing as xkcbby(reviewer below). I stopped reading quite a lot of times and picked it up again thinking that maybe I'd learn to like it later on because it is so different that I just can't understand it. I can't understand the main character, I can get where the others come from, I kinda understand why they were like that and why they act like that but Rosie, I just can't get her. She's irrational and sometimes rational in her readings into the characters she interacts with. I don't know really. Maybe I just haven't met or read a character like that.
But still, it kinda is interesting. I stopped in chapter 19. Maybe I'll push myself later to continue reading. It's just, it's so hard to get through it.
| xkcbby chapter 23 . 10/30/2010
I felt obligated to review this. The story didn't drag, so don't get me wrong. It just seemed long because I couldn't fall in love with the characters. I enjoyed reading about them, but nothing really made me fall in love with any of them. So far, Jack is my favorite, but I presume that's because he hasn't given me any mental trauma. It was hard reading this story; not because it wasn't good (it was well written) but because it was so damn complex and full of lying btches. This is an original on it's own, but I gave up 2/3 of the way through. Like I said, I just couldn't love any of the characters and therefore had no purpose to read. I forced myself to read several other chapters and being on the 2nd to last chapter, I decided it's not worth it.
I'm sad to have gotten this far and not finish it, but I can't. I do hope other readers will see more to this story and enjoy it since this really was original. Pros? The intro really had me hooked. I thought I was in for a memorable ride.