Reviews for The Obsession with Jack
asdfghjhgdsasdfghgfdsasdfghgfd chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
I'm starting to be really interested in this story, Rosie is just fascinating because of her weirdness. Actually she remembered me of the song Too weird, too normal by 42 Eternal(but I doubt she finds eyebrows sexy for some reason).
Capsaicin chapter 24 . 6/19/2010
I can't begin to describe how weird this story was. Weird in a good way, of course. Somehow, I don't think I'll every read anything quite like this again )
Novella Vialli chapter 24 . 5/23/2010
This was an amazing story. It was confusing at first but it didnt take long to understand what was happening. I love the way that you made and didnt make Rosie fall for know, like kind of not following a very cliched storyline. This wasnt the kind of story that made my toes curl under or help the butterflies in my stomach flutter faster, but nonetheless it kept me hooked and also made me happy with the unpredictable outcome of it. Tom and Rosie's kiss was just as bland as you made it appear but it, at times only takes a bland kiss to make you realise that maybe this person is all you need.

Great story and for that you enter my favourites list! :)
ayojess chapter 24 . 3/29/2010

I just spent like 2 hours ofmy life frantically reading this story.

It's honestly so good. Not the fictionpress prepubescent romance fantasy shtick that's abundant here.

This is seriously amazing. I love the way you write your characters, they seem so real. And i love the way you show how she perceives the world. She makes fun of them, but thinks she's pathetic, but she recognizes that other people are almost as bad as her. She's so real.

And the whole Jack-mystery-build-up, complete with a twist was fricking amazing. Get yourself published. seriously. if you ever publish anything, i will go buy it.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 24 . 3/5/2010
Hehehehehehe. Okay, so I was kinda right about Rosie and Tom... kinda, in a weird way. Cleo deserved it.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 23 . 3/5/2010
*Sigh* Well, there goes that theory. No Tom and Rosie. *Sigh again*
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 22 . 3/5/2010
This chapter is so sad and happy and... and I don't even know what. All I know is that when Jack was alive I squealed... and now, he's kind of a jerk-off. I had a feeling Tom and Rosie would get together though... which they haven't yet... but I have a feeling they will.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 21 . 3/5/2010
Jesus Christ. Cleo reminds me of my little sister and Rosie reminds me of myself... so creepy... in a good way. :)
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 19 . 3/5/2010
I really hope this has a happy ending.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 18 . 3/5/2010
I knew it. I started crying like halfway through this chapter because I realized what had happened. You have a really good story, normally fictional things don't make me cry, but this story made me cry twice. Good job! (Seriously, I'm not even being sarcastic)
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 17 . 3/5/2010
Jesus, this chapter made me cry.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 16 . 3/5/2010
This story is really bitter sweet for me... I like it though.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 13 . 3/5/2010
Wow, Cleo is a bitch.
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 11 . 3/5/2010
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 10 . 3/5/2010
Whoa, Rosie is kinda like me... only I don't cry as easily as she does.
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