Reviews for The Obsession with Jack |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm starting to be really interested in this story, Rosie is just fascinating because of her weirdness. Actually she remembered me of the song Too weird, too normal by 42 Eternal(but I doubt she finds eyebrows sexy for some reason). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't begin to describe how weird this story was. Weird in a good way, of course. Somehow, I don't think I'll every read anything quite like this again ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing story. It was confusing at first but it didnt take long to understand what was happening. I love the way that you made and didnt make Rosie fall for Jack...you know, like kind of not following a very cliched storyline. This wasnt the kind of story that made my toes curl under or help the butterflies in my stomach flutter faster, but nonetheless it kept me hooked and also made me happy with the unpredictable outcome of it. Tom and Rosie's kiss was just as bland as you made it appear but it, at times only takes a bland kiss to make you realise that maybe this person is all you need. Great story and for that you enter my favourites list! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY HEL. I just spent like 2 hours ofmy life frantically reading this story. It's honestly so good. Not the fictionpress prepubescent romance fantasy shtick that's abundant here. This is seriously amazing. I love the way you write your characters, they seem so real. And i love the way you show how she perceives the world. She makes fun of them, but thinks she's pathetic, but she recognizes that other people are almost as bad as her. She's so real. And the whole Jack-mystery-build-up, complete with a twist was fricking amazing. Get yourself published. seriously. if you ever publish anything, i will go buy it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehehehe. Okay, so I was kinda right about Rosie and Tom... kinda, in a weird way. Cleo deserved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Sigh* Well, there goes that theory. No Tom and Rosie. *Sigh again* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is so sad and happy and... and I don't even know what. All I know is that when Jack was alive I squealed... and now, he's kind of a jerk-off. I had a feeling Tom and Rosie would get together though... which they haven't yet... but I have a feeling they will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus Christ. Cleo reminds me of my little sister and Rosie reminds me of myself... so creepy... in a good way. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this has a happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it. I started crying like halfway through this chapter because I realized what had happened. You have a really good story, normally fictional things don't make me cry, but this story made me cry twice. Good job! (Seriously, I'm not even being sarcastic) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus, this chapter made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really bitter sweet for me... I like it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Cleo is a bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, Rosie is kinda like me... only I don't cry as easily as she does. |