I'm so glad I stumbled onto this story. It's so far from the run-of-the-mill trash FP can have. AND it's absolutely quirky and lovely. I wasn't expecting it at all.

If I could give a standing ovation I would.

I really, really, really love this story. It's so different from what I expected and I'm so in love with Tom that it's kind of ridiculous. Like, I know I'm not supposed to love Tom, because he's weird, but I kind of do love him. It's odd.

I like it. So far it's a little crazy, and a little disjointed, and that makes it cool. Off to chapter 2!

Peaches,

Anya

omg, that was an awesome story. lol, as soon as i realized she wasnt gonna end up w/ jack i was like "oh, tom!" and when you said McFly, i was all "oh my gosh, i lurve McFly!" When i saw that, i totally hopped up and down like a moron, thinking that someone beside me and my goofy central texas friends knew who they were!

omg

such a good ending!

to a good story of course :)

although I think it was ended kind of quickly. like it doesn't really say what happens at the end. though that seems to be Rosie's style

wow. what a weird, funny, gorgeous story you've written. congratulations on a wonderful story, completed!

haha wow the last line made me laugh out loud. i really liked this story. during most of it, i was confused i will admit haha. this story was very different and interesting. i really enjoyed it. good job!

well, it is a pretty confusing story, but interesting nevertheless. The last line(about piss) made me laugh hysterically)

though I didn't quite get whether Rosie is with Tom and whether she loves Jack...

your story is refreshing and it made me think of certain things. well-written, keep doing things like that;)

good luck!

Interesting first chapter :)

oh my gawd its over! TT You have NO idea how depressed I am that its over! You are such a fantastic writer, and this was the only story I saw here on this site that I liked!

urgh! You have to tell me when you write a new story.

Please consider getting this published. I'm totally not kidding you. You have amazing talent. I'm 99% positive that this story will fly off the shelves.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go bury a hole and cry in it.

Erm, can I say Jack became totally cracked by now just like Joey Barton of the Newcastle football team? Anyway, good final chapter here. For some funny reason, I've sort of foreseen Tom and Rosie getting together, so I'm not too surprised at this. Maybe I'm a psychic? Nah... I don't think so... :P Anyway, I can really imagine possible fireworks between Jack and Cleo in the future lol! Just wondering if Jack knew that Cleo was the one who got him in coma state 'cause well, if so, then that will warrant him the reason to pee in Cleo's drink lol! XD Well, sort of sad to see this story end though, but then again, you really did a good story here. Btw, will you be totally focusing on Peace (don't know if I got the title right or not though...) now or will you crack up another story out of random just like what I'm doing now? Yeah, you've guessed it. I'm planning to start another story soon although it will be on my last priority in updating behind Wolfblood, Elven Chronicles and Circles of Arven respectively. Can you believe I'm still stumped by the plot planning? O.O Anyway, hope to see your review for this new story of mine once I get it up. Bye! :)

Let me just tell you the ending is golden. No, not golden - PLATINUM! It is so amazing!

And as a Rosie/Tom supporter, the whole them getting together (it was appropriately awkward) just made my heart do all sorts of dances of glee.

I still want Rosie to lay a good solid punch on Cleo though. But it's not her kind of thing to do, I understand. I love that Tillie beat up Rhys for Rosie though. And that he didn't really apologise.

I love how Tom was all "Always sitting in a corner, looking into your palms and wishing that you could be more interesting." and it turns out he actually realised that because of Jacks portrait. So you know, it really leaves it to the imagination - what if Jack had come back the same? Would he have recognised Rosie and fallen for her/become her bestest friend ever? Where would that leave Tom? Hmm...drama central! A whole soap opera can be written from that.

And..."Write a song about it." Totally dude.

There should be a song therapy thing. Where people write a song for everything, then, pretty soon, life will become a musical!

Ers, anyway, if I come off as being high I apologise. I'm just so giddy because of this chapter. It was all sorts of awesome!

I don't know. It is a good joke at the end. It is funny how everything fits together at the end.

The story as a whole. It was interesting. I am not so sure that Rosie has made a great character shift. She seems to be still a bit too self conscious and things. Tom, Tillie, Rhys, and Cleo have had some great character developement and change. I am glad that Tom has finally made some kind of move on Rosie. I would have never guessed that from Tom's first appearance in the story, but he has gone through so much to get there and it became obvious at some point in time.

I will have to say that I will miss these characters, and I guess that says something about a story.

Of course, I still remember "Losing the Click". I do miss those guys.

i love this story. it could always make me smile. i'm sad that it ended but, the ending was justified and funny.

I know you've only just posted the last chapter, but I'm totally ready for a sequel already!