Reviews for Wait a minute and Time to move on
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
i dunno, it's the same poem just further down the line... i get the contrast and all (i'm not a complete 'tard, lol) but to me the two poems are a changing of feeling towards one person.

good work
strikingsilver chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
I really like these poems. The first one is my favorite.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
This is good, like how there is two different poems but they kinda flow together. Nice, keep it up!