Reviews for red coffee
becoming . blasphemous chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Nice, love the colors and how it all pulls together.
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
interesting colors implied.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Interesting. Nice tone at the end.
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Wonderful! You are the master of poetry! I love your work. You can take something so small...coffee and work it like a runway model working a working a piece of fauxfur... I love this.
addie pray chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Makes me smile. Lovely, lovely. BTW, my teacher (the 'my annex' poem) grimaced and told me to bring in a less wrinkled copy. Didn't bother to comment on the content.
Unready chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
D vamparism is so fun.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Very tasty, sweet on my tongue.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
sounds fun...
hey maria chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
I'm not usually into poems or stories about vampires, but this was hauntingly beautiful. Good job. :)
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
. Clever

Shavo
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
cool metaphor
with your hand over the night chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
hey,its amazing.i'm suprised that i could love it so much when there are so few syllables too-wow,well done.

-katie-
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
this is amazing...well done...so beautiful. lots of love AC
this is murder chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
o this is like trashy glamour. i love it, it makes so much sense to me. i want this to be all over my school stuff for everyone to see. amazing.
beti213 chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Whoohoo! your phrasing is just so PERFECT... my gosh, this is amazing. what you do with so few words is phenominal *applauds*
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