Dont worry about what people say, im an athesit as well, people have the rights to believe what they want. True christians wouldnt push their religion on anyone...and why would a true christian be reading a gay story o.o? I enjoyed this chapter by the way cant wait to read more

Wow I love Kings of Convenience! You have really good taste in music.

1: I am enjoying this story. Very much. Like, peeing myself enoying it. (Except not peeing myself because... Ew.)

2: Are the chapters named after songs? ust wondering. Because a few have made me wonder, like When Worlds Collide, and Company Calls for example.

3: I JUST FINISHED WATCHING TOUCH OF PINK. I NOW LOVE SAID MOVIE. It's lovely, aww. You should have heard the squeaks of delight I made while watching it.

4: Awesomeness. I'll continue now.

I was really expecting a full blown sex scene but all you give is some good foreplay without the "juicy" stuff if you know what i mean.

Have you ever read "how to write slash like a kid" by jumping jack flash? If you haven't you should I think you could relate.

Wellllllll... lookydehr. C: I'mm christian, emo, and bisheckshuall, and am in HUGE like with this story. Scratch that.. love. c:

I don't mind the comment on Cristians, either. I'm exremely used to it. C:

Ack! This is a good story. -saves in favorites-

i'll get back to it, im just gathering a bunch of stories for nao.

i luv ur character, Pixie! xP

~SUL

But seriously. If you're Christian, why read this?

uh.

wow, stupid. okay? i am a christian, born and raised, and i am also gay. not every person who has a thing for gays has to be agnostic, atheistic, or a satanist.

good god. not every single fucking christian is a complete dick.

Pixie seems to have undergone a complete personality switch.

One minute ago, he was aloof and antisocial.

Also, it is slightly odd how you switch to second person sometimes. I think perhaps you should change the format a little, make it more clear we're switching (persons?).

I am so in love with this story! I just started reading it, and I can't stop. I feel like I already know Pixie-and I love him, he's such an awesome character. Blake, he's cool. He kinda reminds me of one of my friends. :) I can't wait to read the rest of this story. Check out my newwest story 'Oceans Can't stop Us' if you can. (:

*teardrop* i'm christian and i like your story...

Xox. i don't take any offense though, sometimes i want to kick a fellow christian, too.

lol.

xox,

ameths

I totally know what you mean. (Yea im still working on finishing the story but i just had to comment again lol) Trey is definitely my fav. Blake is a very close second though. And i totally love the jumping off the roof thing. It kinda seems like Pixie is trying to get thrown out of this foster home though. Charon seemed really nice and accepting (like over the drinking and sexually active and gay) so i don't understand why he goes out of his way to antagonize her.

OMG I can't even finish this story before I have to review again...maybe i should go for a record or something...anyway (i get off track ALOT if you can't tell, but i usually get back to the point even if noone else has any idea what i'm talking about anymore) The whole moving bibles thing killed me.. i seriously woke everyone in my house up cause i was laughing so hard lol

I don't usually comment until i get to the last chapter...but you said some things that totally made me jump-up-and-down hyper (im really feeling the hyphens right now)...anyway YOU TOTALLY SAID "I'm that cool yo" AND I TOTALLY GET MADE FUN OF FOR SAYING THAT BUT SINCE I FOUND SOMEONE ELSE WHO SAYS IT THAT MAKES IT NORMAL AND WE CAN TAKE OVER THE WORLD TOGETHER (wow i wonder if ill ever turn caps offP) and you said "uber" and defended it as being a word which is AWSOME! (i refuse to put two e's in awsome cause i think it loks weird btw) well i just couldn't contain my excitment from that so i had so say it now. Ill go back to reading now lol

Can I just say, "huzzah"s and high 5s are still VERY popular at my school, in my class. And we're all 16 and 17 :P