oh, oh! i'm reviewing.

eh...*now what?* ok, ok. this was cute! except my mind was gone the moment you said, "eating a bagel." after that, i just pictured sinking my teeth into a piece of bagel loaded with yummy cream cheese *moan* that had, oddly enough, orange sugar sprinkles all over it. no idea where that bit came into it, but what the hey, it did.

i had to go back and reread the last third or so. *shrugs* and it was cute that they kept getting caught in that lie of sleeping in the same bed. not that it really matters, as they were fully clothed, right? *jeez* :D

*Snickers* Like how that bed thing came up. _ Please update!

I totally would of given a look and laughed too.

Aw, his mum is all okay with the whole dating boys thing! Yay. Stupid Jon's aunt and uncle...homophobic assholes...should be shipped off to an island with lots of animals with pointy teeth...Woot.

this was an awesome story! I really loved the humor in it. *Grins* PLEASE update sonn! _

Nice chapter!Your characters are so great, I like to see the next chapter pretty soon, please!:D :D :D

I love this story; it's so hyper and cute. I also love the characters; they're so real. _

You guys are really great writers. I do so enjoy this.

Update soon! Please? (:

OMFG! THAT'S ME!

Love this chapter, it was funneh. Kevin is hawt. And iloveyou. XD Good job. *thumbs up*

I love Corin, but he scares me slightly.

Jon seems less... shy? I guess. Yeah.

Hm.

Still, slumbah partehs kick oyster.

yay? (I iz too tiredz pour la review intelligent? lmao. Wow that was weird. Okay then.)

This was really good. I had to really concentrate to understand so maybe make it more flowing? But I really love this story. Plz update quicker

Hehe, cakes, cookies, closests and cisses...(needed to keep with the alliteration). Funny chapter. Yay.

Good story!I liked it, the characters are cute!Why did Billy broke up with Corin, he really doesn't like him anymore?Why is Joey being so mean?I hate Jessica and Caleb is annoying (And Mandie too...XD)Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I tried to review this before, but the net died. Bah humbug.

Anyway, it's pretty cute, with some classic one liners. D I don't really know what else to say.

Oh, I know! Go review QAA caz I updated. Hehehe. Blah.

Rose

I love the part with the chocolate and jon. I also like the charater development that between Matt and Joey, the little demon. Persoaly I don't think that Hannele should have kicked him the shins she should have kicked him in the gentels.

I really love this. (:

I slowly got off of him and sat back down in my chair and drank my water while silently apologizing that I cheated on it.