What a great first chapter. It just melded into the whole gay thing and didn't make a big deal out of it, which was great.

I love this story, which is code for HURRY UP AND UPDATE, DAMMIT!

"Operation: Hunt Down Jon" *giggles* Dear me. This story really is so cute. Definitely worth favoriting...worshipping in a fangirl fashion...you know. That sort of thing.

Aww, that's so freaking adorable! I love Matt. He's so ...cute! _ Hehe. [continues reading now.]

eh, nothing shot out and slapped me in the mouth in this chapter, so i won't waste anymore of your time quoting your own freaking lines back at you.

let me just state, agian (for the record, ya know) that I ADORE THIS STORY TO PIECES, EVEN THE TINY MICROSCOPIC ATOMIC PIECES. yeah.

so i hope that your next update is speedy in delivery, and i'll be waiting! *anxiously, no doubt about that*

"Eenie, meanie, miny, moe. Where would a sad emo boy go? The restrooms, of course!"

"He’s kissing me. Whoa, he's kissing me! Yay! What do I do? I know! I'll kiss back; yes this is a good plan. Me likes."

again, with the merciless slaughtering of the innocent readers! *cries through my laughter*

"He’s secretly in love with me and wants to make babies..."

"You’re like the opposite of a bother… you’re an un-bother.”

oh god, two of the best lines ever. i think you're trying to kill me or something. you would, i can feel it in my bones that this is a consipiracy story to kill people.

and again with the pointless rambling. i think the mood of the characters is infectious. *favorite list, here the story comes...like a bride!*

i'm lovin' it so far! the conversation is really cute, and it's not the normal...gay guy type of weird guys. *if that makes any sense? i hope so anyway*

and so now, i'll keep reading. forgive me if i don't manage to review each chapter...i'm really trying to curtail my habit of waiting until the end. obviously i'm reviewing.

AND RAMBLING IS OVER. *swear*

So are you going to be switching the povs during the story? And may I say that Joey is flippin' awesome? By the build-up, I honestly thought the dude was about to blow his lid! But alas, his true coolness shone through! *Claps, as a lone tear falls* I am moved.

Woot! Fluff! Fluff rocks! Hahaha, you're story is so funny. I hope you're happy with it. I love it. Joey's funny. M secret plans! Woot. I have to go do mind numbing maths homework now. Thanks for the distraction! Update!

Fluff! I love it, I do. My first slash fic (which is almost finished) is entirely fluff as well. I think it's a good start.

I love this story, by the way. it's just so nifty and random and fun, it makes me want to giggle. x)

AH! i ultra love this story. funny funny and all the goodies. continue continue!

*gigglesnort* Le sigh, we really need to work on snogging stuff. And fluff is good dammit! There aren't enough stories on FP that are fluffy. So pretties make me giggle. *giggles* ...and I'm done.

-Lily

"He finally has his keys out then he sighs and leans in and kisses me. What? He’s kissing me. Whoa, he's kissing me! Yay! What do I do? I know! I'll kiss back; yes this is a good plan. Me likes." ... lol! I love the way his mind works, this story is hilarious, update!

Aw such a cute chapter. I like the way Matt drags Jon everywhere. I like the way Jon sticks his neck out and then retreats. And I love the way May addresses everyone as 'the pretty.'