Reviews for Speaking in Sentences
AmeriqueVida chapter 4 . 1/19/2010
aww. Cute chapter~
AmeriqueVida chapter 3 . 1/19/2010
XD yay!
AmeriqueVida chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
I love the chapter titles! :)
AmeriqueVida chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
XD love it.
Sweet-Cakesz24 chapter 12 . 12/25/2009
omg! i love this story so much! Matt and Jon are the cutest thing ever! It's awesome that Corin and Kevin are together. I can't wait to read more, please update soon!:DD
mariaah chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
this... is a remarkably well done and well written story. it's funny, but no so funny that it has no plot, and even in the first two chapters you get very vivid images of the characters. i was skeptical of the summary- and then confused when Jon started speaking in sentences, lols- and found myself utterly delighted.
learntosayhello chapter 12 . 11/27/2009
xD I love the dialogue in this. Matt is so adorable.
NekoKaigara chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
Great fiction. I'm loving Jon more and soon
XeeWrites chapter 12 . 7/31/2009
Cute ending. Sad about Hannele and May though. I was kind of hoping they'd hit it off.
XeeWrites chapter 11 . 7/31/2009
Oh, I was looking forward to Caleb coming back into the picture. Exciting stuff.
XeeWrites chapter 10 . 7/31/2009
Loved this chapter; It was adorable. Matt has a pretty cool mum. Jealous 3
XeeWrites chapter 9 . 7/31/2009
Morning! I love these guys. They're so much like my own school friends 3 I'm surprised Matt didn't get suspicious when Jon had his arm around Corin's neck, though. Or was it in a different position to how I imagined? It was hard to tell.
XeeWrites chapter 4 . 7/31/2009
I really love your characters.

Anyway, reading the rest tomorrow :)
XeeWrites chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
'But if I’d known how the day would turn out I would have been a lot more excited.'

That line sort of killed this chapter for me. It gave too much away.

Asides from that, I really liked it. It looks like I'll be bumping your reviews up to '200'
XeeWrites chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I'll be honest. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, and some sentences don't flow as well as they could. A little more description wouldn't hurt either.

However, there are a few things that really appeal to me with this story so far. First of all, the main character - he's not only gay, but a little camp too. I really like that, he's very likable and realistic. The contrast between him and Jon is really appealing as well. I like most of your dialog and it was definitely a very strong opening chapter.

Kudos. I'm looking forward to more.
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