|Reviews for Speaking in Sentences|
| XeeWrites chapter 10 . 7/31/2009
Loved this chapter; It was adorable. Matt has a pretty cool mum. Jealous 3
| XeeWrites chapter 9 . 7/31/2009
Morning! I love these guys. They're so much like my own school friends 3 I'm surprised Matt didn't get suspicious when Jon had his arm around Corin's neck, though. Or was it in a different position to how I imagined? It was hard to tell.
| XeeWrites chapter 4 . 7/31/2009
I really love your characters.
Anyway, reading the rest tomorrow :)
| XeeWrites chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
'But if I’d known how the day would turn out I would have been a lot more excited.'
That line sort of killed this chapter for me. It gave too much away.
Asides from that, I really liked it. It looks like I'll be bumping your reviews up to '200'
| XeeWrites chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I'll be honest. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, and some sentences don't flow as well as they could. A little more description wouldn't hurt either.
However, there are a few things that really appeal to me with this story so far. First of all, the main character - he's not only gay, but a little camp too. I really like that, he's very likable and realistic. The contrast between him and Jon is really appealing as well. I like most of your dialog and it was definitely a very strong opening chapter.
Kudos. I'm looking forward to more.
| ella3114 chapter 12 . 6/13/2009
It's so gayish!
Actually I have been looking forward for a happy ending.
Like,when they graduated and then bla-bla-bla...
But overall,it is still a great story
| CemelDosce chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Matt's a complete and utter psycho...i LOVE him!... Great story so far...and Jon is just too sweet.
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
1:"another murderess glare" murderous. Jessica could have given the other kind, but Jon couldn't.
Here a plain pizza comes with peperoni.
I just have to say: I love Matt.
6:"are you read yet? ready
I guess Billy kept trying to change who Corin was (at the concert) so he's probably better off without him. And Kevin could use a little attention.
I think this is my favorite 'go to pick up the sister, but take the brother out' story and I wrote one.
| Marine Wifey chapter 12 . 2/15/2009
Very awesome story! Please write more soon! )
| Caisele chapter 12 . 1/30/2009
this is awesome. you should win an award, or like a hat (lol)
| Caisele chapter 5 . 1/30/2009
| Caisele chapter 3 . 1/29/2009
OMG i love this! no lies. i do i do i do XD
| Caisele chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I love this story!
| jack chapter 12 . 1/12/2009
A really beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much.
| jack chapter 9 . 1/12/2009
What a crazy chapter! I laughed all the way through it!
Way to go!