| Reviews for Speaking in Sentences |
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   XeeWrites chapter 10 . 7/31/2009 Loved this chapter; It was adorable. Matt has a pretty cool mum. Jealous 3 |
| XeeWrites chapter 9 . 7/31/2009 Morning! I love these guys. They're so much like my own school friends 3 I'm surprised Matt didn't get suspicious when Jon had his arm around Corin's neck, though. Or was it in a different position to how I imagined? It was hard to tell. |
| XeeWrites chapter 4 . 7/31/2009 I really love your characters. Anyway, reading the rest tomorrow :) |
| XeeWrites chapter 3 . 7/31/2009 'But if I’d known how the day would turn out I would have been a lot more excited.' That line sort of killed this chapter for me. It gave too much away. Asides from that, I really liked it. It looks like I'll be bumping your reviews up to '200' |
| XeeWrites chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 I'll be honest. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, and some sentences don't flow as well as they could. A little more description wouldn't hurt either. However, there are a few things that really appeal to me with this story so far. First of all, the main character - he's not only gay, but a little camp too. I really like that, he's very likable and realistic. The contrast between him and Jon is really appealing as well. I like most of your dialog and it was definitely a very strong opening chapter. Kudos. I'm looking forward to more. |
| ella3114 chapter 12 . 6/13/2009 Great story! It's so gayish! Lol. Actually I have been looking forward for a happy ending. Like,when they graduated and then bla-bla-bla... But overall,it is still a great story |
| CemelDosce chapter 2 . 6/3/2009 Matt's a complete and utter psycho...i LOVE him!... Great story so far...and Jon is just too sweet. |
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 5/16/2009 1:"another murderess glare" murderous. Jessica could have given the other kind, but Jon couldn't. Here a plain pizza comes with peperoni. I just have to say: I love Matt. 6:"are you read yet? ready I guess Billy kept trying to change who Corin was (at the concert) so he's probably better off without him. And Kevin could use a little attention. I think this is my favorite 'go to pick up the sister, but take the brother out' story and I wrote one. |
| Marine Wifey chapter 12 . 2/15/2009 Very awesome story! Please write more soon! ) |
| Caisele chapter 12 . 1/30/2009 AWn this is awesome. you should win an award, or like a hat (lol) write more! |
| Caisele chapter 5 . 1/30/2009 LOVE! |
| Caisele chapter 3 . 1/29/2009 OMG i love this! no lies. i do i do i do XD |
| Caisele chapter 1 . 1/29/2009 I love this story! |
| jack chapter 12 . 1/12/2009 A really beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much. |
| jack chapter 9 . 1/12/2009 What a crazy chapter! I laughed all the way through it! Way to go! |