Reviews for Speaking in Sentences
Broken Wrist chapter 12 . 7/2/2007
Aw! Sweet. Jon sounds cute and...um...cute. Lika da storya.

NS
Annwyl chapter 12 . 4/28/2007
:D cute story.
color-of-her-eyes chapter 12 . 4/26/2007
hm it's strange to review a completed story. probably the first time I did.

You have to leave out all the typical stuff ala "keep it coming" and "I really wanna know what happens next"...

anyway I can still say that I loved it.

I really did...

(cause they're all so cute and the storyflow is just nice...)

tomorrow, when the sun rises again (2 am now), I'll check out your profile to see if there is anything else to read...

now I'm just gonna close my laptop, before I find something else I might get addicted to or I'll stay up the whole night.

by the way, I read this story in one day...that's how good it was
Kizuna chapter 12 . 3/10/2007
I loved this story! It was so good! Great work!_
Meanne77 chapter 12 . 2/22/2007
(I might seem blunt. Please take notice that half of it is because I'm not English and it's hard for me to express my-self like I'd like. I don't know to smooth what I say, it's already hard to say something at all that would make sense in English...)

Ok, I read it all in one go and... how to say that? I think you should work a little more on the "plot" thing (... or lack of). The beginning was nice (even if a little bit too fast, no transition, no "breathing" scene between eventful ones... which leave the reader kind of breathless (which isn't a good thing) at the end of a chapter) but... as I was going on with the story I was really wondering where you were leading us.

Sadly, I least wonder that at the end.

Also, two points that *really* upset me:

- Is Bill, like, dead or something? Weren't they suppose to be at least a little bit friends, here? No one talks about him, talks *to* him, he just "doesn't love Corin anymore" and that's it, end of the story?

- So what, Matt and Joey weren't supposed to be, like, friends too? Doesn't Matt want to try at least talk with his friend, like, asking for an explanation? One chapter Joey is all: yeah, I always knew you were gay and thanks to me you now have a boyfriend, and the next time we see him, he acts like a silent asshole? Without any reason? Without anyone asking him WHY?

Sorry but I'm really "wtf", here...

Couldn't have been a nice story... with more plot and less plotholes...
failte200 chapter 12 . 2/2/2007
Aw...

Sweet story. And I read the whole thing, too! Even got a little revenge in there for the step-brother. Although... I still wonder what Joey's deal was...
failte200 chapter 5 . 2/2/2007
What laugh at your slashy scene? It was great! It should have gone on LONGER!1!eleven1! I keep smiling as I read this... (chuckle).

Only nit was a chap or two back in the lunchroom - Matt and Jon and Corin and Billy and Hannele and Kevin and... who tf else? Joey? Jesus...

I like the high-school-clever dialogue tho, even the narrator is doing it. :)
Virginia Giselle chapter 12 . 1/16/2007
Great ending. :]

You're all great writers and I really enjoyed this.
rahrchizkkelle chapter 12 . 12/28/2006
loved it. I'll miss Jon..
KaleLongsworth chapter 12 . 12/26/2006
I guess this is the end. I had a ton of fun reading this story. Keep up the great job you do writing. Is there by any chance going to be a sequel?
Green Eyed Pixie chapter 12 . 12/26/2006
This is an awesome story. Jon and Matt are so cute! And I loved Kevin and Corin so much, they suit each other. Caleb was such a bastard, but i'm happy that Matt told his Dad and that he was okay with it _. I also hated Joey and Jessica, i hope they burn in hell. Great story!
Isidris Gry chapter 12 . 12/25/2006
wow, that was it? Glad everything worked out alright, and that Kevin and Corin got together. They'd make a cute couple.
Liviania chapter 12 . 12/24/2006
I like the ending-especially Caleb's huffy phone call.

Livi
diebyownhands chapter 12 . 12/23/2006
because I was bored I decided to check the authors in my alert list for updates, had I not done that I would have completely missed this!

Grr fp, grr

sad to see it end, but glad everything turned out nicely
Midnights Scream chapter 12 . 12/23/2006
The End? As in no more?How could you end it like that...I'm a little disappointed. Good anyway though.
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