Reviews for when somebody's here
Phoenix Octavia Bright chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Liked the poem, especially the ending, but do have to agree that something is missing, although I can't say what. But I liked it

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Seth T chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
this was pretty good, but it had potential to be better. I liekd it but it didn't seem to flow, it seemed like it was missing a few words like linking words or whatever. I dunno. Hte song was good though