Kewl...but the first chapter was kinda boring...

great chappie! update soon!

Dun dun dun! Well, I am guessing that because she was so nice and helpful, that their study session went perfectly. I hope they make friends with each other, bridging the gap that was never meant to be...

Aw, ok I deffinetly like this story! You could use some more details in it, but it's still really good regardless. Keep up the good work!

I don't get it. What parenthesis? ...oh well. I think I like Amy, as she seems like one of thos quiet girls who is actually outrageously out there when given the priveldge!

Please try to avoid stereotypes and cliches. I would suggest that you remove the charecter bios before the story and let the reader figure out personalities on their own, and watch out that you don't switch between past and present tense.