Reviews for Jock Smarts
Tucking Fypo chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Kewl...but the first chapter was kinda boring...
queen-lala chapter 4 . 9/16/2005
great chappie! update soon!
Cherise chapter 4 . 9/16/2005
Dun dun dun! Well, I am guessing that because she was so nice and helpful, that their study session went perfectly. I hope they make friends with each other, bridging the gap that was never meant to be...
Miz Em chapter 2 . 9/12/2005
Aw, ok I deffinetly like this story! You could use some more details in it, but it's still really good regardless. Keep up the good work!
Cherise chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
I don't get it. What parenthesis? ...oh well. I think I like Amy, as she seems like one of thos quiet girls who is actually outrageously out there when given the priveldge!
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Please try to avoid stereotypes and cliches. I would suggest that you remove the charecter bios before the story and let the reader figure out personalities on their own, and watch out that you don't switch between past and present tense.
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