|Reviews for Eye Petals|
| in theory chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
The pureness and simplicity is breathsnatching, I loved reading this. And your bio amused me :P
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
oh wow... the DELICACY of this, the tripping stumbling beauty & fragility... it is actually perfect. which is quite scary.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
I love how this has end rhyme, but everything flows together into one long statement, not separate sentences. This is so heartbreaking. Wonderful job. Keep writing! :)
| Twenty Nine chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Short and absolute. Excellent work.
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
wow, so sad.I kinda feel this way now.I miss you, my
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
so pretty so sad so delicate, tender , a whirlwind pearl blend of sweet and bitter emotions. i just love it. "petal-laced" and the ending line is just so simple and yet so powerful.
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Aww. Sweet and sad. Odd how that works out, isn't it? This rings softly of the hurt indifference causes... Wonderful imagery, beautifully captured emotions. Very well written.
| Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
This was... aching.
So hauntingly beautiful and terrible at the same time.
I love your descriptions. Always.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
very cool.. short and great.. the whole concept is really original & cool
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
That is beautiful...very discriptive and powerful. The images are very rich and fresh in detail. This is great work. Keep writing, Katja.
| Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
So beautiful. I love it. :D Simple and perfect.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
This is amazing, the whole piece is indescribably beautiful.