Reviews for Eye Petals
in theory chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
The pureness and simplicity is breathsnatching, I loved reading this. And your bio amused me :P
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
oh wow... the DELICACY of this, the tripping stumbling beauty & fragility... it is actually perfect. which is quite scary.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
I love how this has end rhyme, but everything flows together into one long statement, not separate sentences. This is so heartbreaking. Wonderful job. Keep writing! :)
Twenty Nine chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Short and absolute. Excellent work.
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
wow, so sad.I kinda feel this way now.I miss you, my
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
so pretty so sad so delicate, tender , a whirlwind pearl blend of sweet and bitter emotions. i just love it. "petal-laced" and the ending line is just so simple and yet so powerful.
s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
Aww. Sweet and sad. Odd how that works out, isn't it? This rings softly of the hurt indifference causes... Wonderful imagery, beautifully captured emotions. Very well written.
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
thats beautiful
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
This was... aching.

So hauntingly beautiful and terrible at the same time.

I love your descriptions. Always.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
very cool.. short and great.. the whole concept is really original & cool
The Postscript chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
That is beautiful...very discriptive and powerful. The images are very rich and fresh in detail. This is great work. Keep writing, Katja.
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
So beautiful. I love it. :D Simple and perfect.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
This is amazing, the whole piece is indescribably beautiful.

Much love,Juliet.