Reviews for In Retrospect
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Cold, detached, and trying deeply, wishing for revival.
tranCendenZ chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I liked the first part especially where you said: "She never looked at meWith less passionThan when she saw right through me". You took something very cliche and turned it into something very original and personal. Kudos to that!

But then the flow kind of dropped off and became too literal (for lack of a better explanation). It kind of feels like you were giving readers a play by play rather than a poem afte that first part.

I like your ideas, though, and I'd like to see some of your non-poetry works, if you have any.
Phantomess chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
M... I love a bit dark, a bit gritty. It just feels so damn , that second verse... its perfection.