|Reviews for Enter|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Interesting poem you have here. I do like that the entire thing is about writing. That's fabulous. You have such a way with words, and I wish you were still posting on this site, because I do miss reading your work. Keep writing! :)
| sarah1491 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Nice poem ;)
| Marioh chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
beautiful piece! specially the line ''starched sameness'', speically because thats how ifeel with most of the poetry i read ( except for the few which i review). This piece is very effective and the flow superb!
| Searching4Truth chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
Wow, excellent poem. The depth was amazing. The words flowed together beautifully. What a great vocabulary! Lol, great job! I can't say enough good things about this poem. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)
| Exquisitely chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
I totally agree with White Phoenix Erialis. To quote Anonymously Loved, "intricate vocabulary". And to repeat the question, were you from RGS? I am curious for I am in RGS currently. :3
I really liked the way this poem (to me) had different tangible layers - the deep, underlying meaning and yet the portrayal of innocence in writing. You do poetry so well. Brought down my self-esteem, bleh. (X
| Tyndall Blue chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
a ragged sailing, corrugatedlike the score of tolling bells...Each break in rhythm here
is an enjambement,the suggestion of sanitythat catches at barbed gates;
would it be too imposing to say i love you?I have come to your poetrylate
will a ravenous hunger foryour words and phrasesstrung together witha sort of tangable nostalgiathat gripsat the back of the throata strip of velcro thatwon't go down
no matter how much you swallow
| xaquelina chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
I really like the symbolism here, good job.
Oh, and thanks for the review on mine, I agree about liking free verse better, but my English teacher has this thing about wanting poems to rhyme. :)
| Moronic Heroine chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
You have an astounding vocabulary that sweeps me away. I admire the flow of your poem- there is a youthful yet insightful feel to the way you write that is incredibly inspiring.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
So many words and beautiful meanings~~ you present your poems so stylishly~ good work!
| Oriel Vaughn chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Serendipity! Sounds cute. A rather onomatopeic word :) A lot of deep words here - but they fit in the spirit of this poem, so that's good. You have a really wide vocabulary! Lastly, I'd like to say, yes this does remind me of RGS! lol. Keep up the good writing! :)
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Nice realization and ferocity.
| Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Lovely! This is what poetry ought to be!
| Munchin chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
WOw.. you seriously have a vocabulary. it is amazing ad this piece demonstrates it. It is really great! I liked it but I can't say why.. but I liked the use of different words..
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
was so beautiful,and i adore the words and the language you've used to make it truly also flows work.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Once, every morning flagsthat are blue snatches ofa starched sameness.- oh gosh, reminds me of sound of music, crisp colors. wow, it reminds me also of a book i am reading, everything is surreal and better than what it seems.
is an enjambement,the suggestion of sanitythat catches at barbed gates- barbed gates. love it. reminds me of sealed fate.
we are all a bit, nostalgic anyway.
andnothing impeaches me nowas long as I can explainmy skirmishes with truth,- reminds me of a postal service song.