Interesting poem you have here. I do like that the entire thing is about writing. That's fabulous. You have such a way with words, and I wish you were still posting on this site, because I do miss reading your work. Keep writing! :)

Nice poem ;)

beautiful piece! specially the line ''starched sameness'', speically because thats how ifeel with most of the poetry i read ( except for the few which i review). This piece is very effective and the flow superb!

Wow, excellent poem. The depth was amazing. The words flowed together beautifully. What a great vocabulary! Lol, great job! I can't say enough good things about this poem. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)

I totally agree with White Phoenix Erialis. To quote Anonymously Loved, "intricate vocabulary". And to repeat the question, were you from RGS? I am curious for I am in RGS currently. :3

I really liked the way this poem (to me) had different tangible layers - the deep, underlying meaning and yet the portrayal of innocence in writing. You do poetry so well. Brought down my self-esteem, bleh. (X

a ragged sailing, corrugatedlike the score of tolling bells...Each break in rhythm here

is an enjambement,the suggestion of sanitythat catches at barbed gates;

would it be too imposing to say i love you?I have come to your poetrylate

will a ravenous hunger foryour words and phrasesstrung together witha sort of tangable nostalgiathat gripsat the back of the throata strip of velcro thatwon't go down

no matter how much you swallow

I really like the symbolism here, good job.

Oh, and thanks for the review on mine, I agree about liking free verse better, but my English teacher has this thing about wanting poems to rhyme. :)

Woah.

You have an astounding vocabulary that sweeps me away. I admire the flow of your poem- there is a youthful yet insightful feel to the way you write that is incredibly inspiring.

So many words and beautiful meanings~~ you present your poems so stylishly~ good work!

keep writing!

Serendipity! Sounds cute. A rather onomatopeic word :) A lot of deep words here - but they fit in the spirit of this poem, so that's good. You have a really wide vocabulary! Lastly, I'd like to say, yes this does remind me of RGS! lol. Keep up the good writing! :)

Nice realization and ferocity.

Lovely! This is what poetry ought to be!

WOw.. you seriously have a vocabulary. it is amazing ad this piece demonstrates it. It is really great! I liked it but I can't say why.. but I liked the use of different words..

was so beautiful,and i adore the words and the language you've used to make it truly also flows work.

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Once, every morning flagsthat are blue snatches ofa starched sameness.- oh gosh, reminds me of sound of music, crisp colors. wow, it reminds me also of a book i am reading, everything is surreal and better than what it seems.

is an enjambement,the suggestion of sanitythat catches at barbed gates- barbed gates. love it. reminds me of sealed fate.

we are all a bit, nostalgic anyway.

andnothing impeaches me nowas long as I can explainmy skirmishes with truth,- reminds me of a postal service song.

salute.