The poem was lovely. I truly enjoyed it.

Another poem for the "kick-ass poetry file". I absolutely love how you took the childrens games and rhymes and used them for your own purpose. supurb.

Interesting poem, I liked all the references to the childhood games.

Oh my Lord, this is so amazing. I can't even think of words to describe it...It's breathtaking, it's haunting, it's got SPECTATCULAR imagery, and a poem like this is the goal of every poet.