Reviews for Earth Beneath My Feet
Orion Demasecus chapter 5 . 10/8/2005
I really like how you emphasise the fact tht she canj't get him out of her mind even when he's being what you'd call an asshole.
Orion Demasecus chapter 4 . 10/8/2005
Sounds like a broken heart to me. Happens to the best of us. I like how you mixed it with skating.
Orion Demasecus chapter 3 . 10/8/2005
I have definately felt like that before. I like it, so calm and a little's good.
Orion Demasecus chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
I like how you managed to make it quite poetic.
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Quite interesting. I could actually see you extending this into a story somehow, but that's just my opinion.
Brighton Baby chapter 5 . 9/10/2005
if these r abt ur life i'm so sorry! we're alike actually in the respect that our hearts keep breaking