Oh, it's so sad! Good poem, it really grabs your attention.

. It ended sadly... very sad. Keep up those poems!

this si sad but good nonethless..ur a gifted writer.

Oh-my-god. That was simply amazing. The rhyme scheme was simple, yet you transformed it into something intricately beautiful, and you portrayed your message clear as crystal. Definately one of the best poems I have ever read. Really well done

Wow, impressive poem. Excellent work. Very good! Keep writing!

~Anna~