Reviews for Thumbs In
FTL chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
I really liked this. Well done. )
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
i love the phrase "glasshearted" and the metaphor itself is brilliant.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Again, a wonderful job. This is much better than anything I could ever write.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Nice, great pace.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
And carefully, I like you, but you make meso glasshearted.-I love that; to be glasshearted, I'm so jealous of that metaphore right now.

Juliet.
TheUni chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Very nice. I really like this poem. EVERYONE has a point of view like this at one point or another. I mean, everyone shapes their own personality as they grow older. The bad thing is... once it's formed, it's really hard to change it.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
wow, made sense! makes me think about... certain things... hm... anyhows, great job!

keep writing!
smile persephone chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
"Shifting my intimacies, I'm/working up to being so perfect" - Love that! This is written so beautifully. I love the style. I adore the title as well. Nicely done!
Calligrapher of Hearts chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Whoa! VERY Carol Anne Duffy - was my fave poet till I read your shizzle nizzle! oP - very intimate, strong yet incredibly delicate. The last line "let's finish what we started"... met'inks I can venture a guess as to whut it's all aboot (Alfie!) when I read that hehe oP This is definitely one of your heartfelt, and certainly one of your bestest! *sniffs* Me smellz this goin' on me favez list! oD xhXix
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
i like this...reminds me of myself a bit, especially the bit about being "fingers and thumbs"...has a lot of nice imagery in this and creates such a vivid pic in my mind...well done this is beautiful. lots of love AC
Furhead chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
wow, i love the last verse. Dont get me wrong, i love the other 2 as well and i dont want them to get an inferiority complex but the last verse really stands out for me. "glasshearted", stroke of genious D