Reviews for My Knight in Shining Armour
bunnyrabbit228 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
I really like how you use anomonopia. It really gives the poem greater effect. Awesome job.

-bunnyrabbit228
lightning sphinx chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Well written. I love the way it sounds. Keep up the good work!

lightningSphinX
TheLastKiss chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
I loved it! Especially the persistent rhythm. We're all hope for that one guy who will be so perfect and sweep us off our feet. And sometimes you wish he would just hurry up already! Greak work!

Best Wishes, Brittney
Deluded chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Hmm... well, I can't quite appreciate the placement of the da-dums and the beeps. The jump back into reality is a really nice idea, though the words might have been better off as script for a movie. Red as a rose? The one in yonder garden grows?
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Reminds me of a Cinderella parody. In a way. WOD