Reviews for As One Once So Young
WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Very, very good. I can really relate. "In a heartbeat years have passed/and only memories linger to be recalled" - so true.
Thurayya chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
That was so touching, I thought it displayed powerful emotion, especially with the last line. I related to it well, too, which made it all the more better for me. :)

- ala
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Nice work! Well done and keep writing! _