Reviews for Nothing
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
This poem is...abstract. Not in a bad way or anything, your ideas are just put together in an interesting way, it works well here. I like how you built it up, and then the ending took it in another direction.

priceless gallery chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
So beautiful, almost as if the poem was whispering a message to me.. I loved it.. well done on this!
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Oh, well written indeed. I love this. It's amazing. But if all we fear is fear, why don't we give tit up and be fearless? (sorry, rambling and probably totally irrelevant, but it was fun!)
Needa S chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
It gives one a chilly feeling. Awesome write just the same.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
oh! it's epiphanies of truth like this, that cast light on the shadows of our murky souls... it's ace!

i'm glad you're still around and still writing.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
a void... no such thing as existence~ great meaning~

keep writing!
curiouzkatt chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
cool as ever... -
Modern Poet chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Haunting. Great poem.
SilveredScales chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Woah. Cool. Search inside for long enough and you find something, sometimes it's yourself and sometimes well written, really reflects the cold void