Reviews for The Angels' Death
PF chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
good, but you critizice my grammar/punctuation? half of it is Neteri Bennu's fault

1 why angel2. what country3. why darts
Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
*sniff*... aww! So sad! Amazing amount of emotion put into so few words! AMAZING job! Loved it! You should continue this!

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AlexdR chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
uh, i hope you continue this! sounds interesting already though, thanks for the reviews,Alex
a-poets-soul-ablaze chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Hm,this an extremely well-written piece...Maybe you should structure one sentnce to the left,then the continuing sentence below to the a suggestion,but good poem.