|Reviews for Lakes of Pearls|
| in theory chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Flickering with an unsteady but brave selection of vocabulary, the title of this is an interesting topic to think about. I mean, how it relates to the rest of the piece etc. Nice job.
| SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
very cool; nice imagery again. short sharp and most definitley SWEET! I love the lake of pearls, gives a pretty picture, doesn't it?do you get bored in Sose too? I hate Sose, oh and thnx for your review!
| ygg chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Lovely mythological twist when you brought up Charybdis! The last line really rocks! Has a sense of draining every drop of life out of the world. Wonderful!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
I love that last line; dying waterfalls, its so end of the world.