Reviews for timing
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
this is really odd. you do a great job with wording, though, and have an interesting format.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Its weird; its loose, and its off the wall, but honestly I have felt like this, and I can really relate to it. I don't think that I've ever read a poem about the tailspin of life when you feel this way. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.