Oh no, I forgot this was takes down. I really wanted to re-read it again.

Hi, I'm so glad you tied up that loose end with Damian. I really sorry to see that all your stories have been removed but I definitely do understand. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.

Please do let me know if you ever do post again or publish. I would love to re-read all your stories again.

Noooooo. I was just about to read this story because it sounded promising '( . Is there another website its on or something?

I sometimes re-read my favorite stories and was completely heartbroken to see it gone! I re-read this story a lot. It's so amazing! I understand your reasons but I miss the story. :"(

Love the story really enjoyed it, but I would have love to know what happened to ryan and evan in the end. Those two were just too cute!

Awesome story!

So, I first found this story long ago, when you were first writing it. Then I somehow lost track of it, never receiving notifications that you'd been updating. About a year or two ago, I was going through my favorite stories when I found this one. Relizing I'd somehow missed the updates (I came to the wedding chapter and was like "What? They're getting married? I clearly missed something.") I went back to read this story from the beginning.

I just have to say, this is my all time favorite story. It's so full of fluff! I come back to read bits and pieces often. It kind of proves to be a source of inspiration for me sometimes. Winter and Kier... I really can't describe them. I LOVE them and I love the journey they go on. I also like that while you never included a fight between them, Winter does mentions that they've had their share of problems. Although, I'm curious to know what a fight between Winter and Kier would entail, what they fought about, how they act while mad at each other, how they made up...

I also would have liked to see Ryan and Evan at the hospital to meet their new brother. That would've been too cute. D

*whistful sigh* I seriously can't get enough of this story. I think I'll die if it ever gets taken down. Not to pressure you or anything, haha.

So, I think I've monopolized enough of this review. I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story. I've been meaning to do it for a long time now. I got sucked in again today and finally remembered to reivew. )

I liked this story, but I felt as though there were too many different plot lines, and like most acted as filler: forgotten quickly, or inconsistent in your writing. overall I really enjoyed this though, good job!

Also, I'm pretty sure she does say goodbye to Shane at the airport the first time. Just sayn'.

You're from Malaysia? Go figure. :) Hmm. :) Where were you from?

Aww... That *sob* is just so *sob* cuute! :) This story was soo amazing! You did a great job on it! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Hmm. I think I really like this story. It's an interesting way to use a plot like this. Not the typical drama or fights or anything.

Well-written, although, as you said, it does kind of skip every now and then. It IS a bit disjointed, but it's alright.

Also, when old characters are brought up, perhaps it would be better to include a short description of them to remind the reader of who they are. I have really short memory and it always takes me some time to remember people like Tyler and Sophie and Rennie :) Maybe if you plan on editing this in the future?

Also, maybe it would also have been good to see a few fights or arguments between Kier and Winter, just so we can see that theirs isn't the typical fairytale romance of all smiles and sunshine and happiness.

Kier's transition from hotcoldhotcold to just, well, hot was kind of abrupt as well. Unless he was meant to be that way?

I don't mean to be completely negative. Those things I mentioned are merely suggestions, to perhaps make the story clearer and easier to understand.

Regardless of those few details, I very much enjoyed this story to the end. It was interesting and casual, despite their fame. I like their characters, I like their interactions, I like the plot. Well done :) I don't know if you're still going to write, but I put you on author alert just in case :)

That was truly wonderful...a beautiful story and i loved it very much..!

Nice ending! I'm just wondering about the two studs (Evan and Ryan). lol. What happened to them after ch 24? I was expecting them somewhere in the epilogue specially since the new little angel came but they weren't there. :(

wot! the good ex appears! 8D

This story is cute, but I feel like everything happened too easily and you brushed over a lot of things. Like she didn't seem broken at all after coming to New York. You would have thought she'd have some troubles opening up as well but really it was like she just turned extroverted over night, which didn't really make any sense. Also I thought that Kier and Winter got together too quickly. Like she broke him open too easily. If it was that easy, then why hadn't another girl done it? If his only thing stopping him from getting a girlfriend was that he didn't like it when girls liked him for fame, what about all the other models in their world? You also didn't show any traces of his old self after he opened up to her, which was strange. There also wasn't really much of an explanation for why he acted that way. You also mentioned that he changed into the person he is today because of his breakup with Alyssa, but then later you just made it seem like they broke up because he changed. Also I felt like... the whole past relationships thing should have been dealt with better. I think regardless of other peoples' feelings, Kier should have told Winter about his past relationship with Alyssa. If he's going to share himself and his life with her, she deserves to hear it all from him, without her having to ask. Sure the chapter was closed, but it definitely wasn't closed by him or on his accord. I feel like that was missing from their relationship. I also think that Damien should have been a bigger deal. Like Winter should have told Kier that he was bothering her, or that she ran into him. Do they only talk about their exes if they end up in the newspaper kissing them? That's kind of how it came off.

I also think that Shayne was another issue. I agree he totally just disappeared after Winter moved to New York, and I feel like you just randomly threw him back in there because you suddenly remembered him again. You didn't show any of that struggle that Winter described to Shayne when it was actually happening. In fact, I think that was part of what was missing from the story.

Also it didn't seem like Winter had kids at all. She just went off and did whatever. It's like she got the awes that's sweet for bringing in two homeless boys, but she never actually had to take up any of the responsibility for it. She would have been a lot more restricted in her activities, her job, and her relationship if she was actually raising those 2 kids. I understand that part of it comes from her grandparents being there to help her but I feel like if she was the mother, she would have wanted to take on that responsibility.

Overall I feel like this story was just too innocent and too fluffy. It didn't have enough depth and didn't really portray the emotions and struggles that would have actually been there if this were to actually happen. It wasn't very realistic and I think that while Kier & Winter are cute together, you never really showed why they were right for one another. Like why did it HAVE to be Winter? Why couldn't it or why wasn't it any other girl for Kier? What was it about her that made Kier feel differently for her than he did for anyone else?

Anyway just some thoughts to think about. Cute story.

- Alyssa