Reviews for From Pauper to Princess
PinkEyedBoy chapter 20 . 8/16/2007
Me is very much hating the mother. If I were a lion, I'd totally roar in her face!

Your story slaps a big smile on my face and I laugh! I laugh so much! Laughter! Yay for your story! I like Kyle, by the way. He's like, sexy! I drew him! I wanna show you, but I don't have a scanner.

Consider yourself favorited though! Love, love, love &lots of melted chocolate stuffs!
Susurrent Threnody chapter 20 . 7/10/2007
Dang, her mom is seriously and unequivocally screwed up. What happened to rehab? I bet she went, didn't care, left, then went back to whatever she was doing.

Nice work on this.
rosieroo chapter 20 . 7/4/2007
this is realy good! I LUV IT! but i dont like the mother... shes too mean! omgsh this IS GOOD! seriously! wow... so KEEP TYPING AS FAST AS U CAN!

i think ill start on you castle hill story...
KelseyBell910 chapter 20 . 6/28/2007
This is SO good! You are a fantastic writer! Continue this REALLY soon! ]
Gigi chapter 20 . 6/13/2007
aww
arouralai chapter 20 . 6/9/2007
AMAZING!
xLoveAddictx chapter 20 . 6/3/2007
aw...I love Kier more and more as the story goes on. He's so sweet! Winter is awsome for doing that to her mom! I would've done the same only there would've been ALOT of curses flying and I would've been meaner. lol but neway this is an awsome chapter and an even more awsome story! update soon!
Rusted Barnacle chapter 20 . 6/3/2007
Hey there! Stumbled across your story, and decided to give it a go... Have a couple of critiques (not flames), so bear with me, yeah? D

Good stuff first. I really like the characters! Kier sounds pretty swell, for a punk guy. Winter is pretty cool too...

Your chapters are uber-long, which I love so that's a huge plus on your side.

Bringing kids into the story was absolute ace! They seem to defuse ANY tension at all! Gotta love them..

By the way, how old are your characters anyway? Just curious...

However...

When I was trawling through the last few chapters, I had a feeling that you have no idea where the story is going. True, conflicts pop up here and there, but there's no real threat in the story. You could have made Damien want her back so badly, he's willing to commit crime for it, but just a 'Hello, Hi, Nice too see you again' moment with his latest beau.

I kinda felt that the transition between scenes and chapters were a bit vague and blurry. There's no real connection, and it kinda seems to jump from here and there. Like I said before, you have a vague plotline, and you know HOW the story is goig to end (3 guesses how!), but you're not sure what's gonna happen in between or how Kier and Winter will really click and connect. I may be wrong, yes, but it's just how I percieve the story to be, coz it was a bit draggy the last few chapters.

And I know you're from Oz Oz Oz Oi Oi Oi, so the endearment 'love' pops up, but I'm pretty sure they don't say that in America. It's quite a British thing, I think.

Entertaining (quips, wits and sarcasm ahoy!), but you need to inject more feeling into the story. Make it more believable, so much so that when you write it out you yourself smile, laugh, cry and skip along to your characters.

One more thing: How can she just accept her mother waltzing back into her life just like that? Preposterous... And her formidable grandma should have just sent the mother packing in the first place.

Keep updating, and good luck with the exams!

PS: I'm Malaysian too D Studying in New Zealand at the moment, such a wicked awesome place!
leighala chapter 20 . 6/2/2007
STUPID BITCH! (not u, the mother )

omg, I HATE HER! SHE's SO GAY! ...I wonder what addiction she has...hm...

annways...*sigh*...it was nice picking up this storee again...

UPDATE SOON!

xKy
leighala chapter 19 . 6/2/2007
WHE! me again...

i heartt this chapter - so cool!

and WHATS WITH THE CLIFFHANGER? *stab* *stab* -growl- i DONT LIKE CLIFFHANGERS!

well, actually i do but whatever...i wonder what gran is gonna tell her?

xKy
leighala chapter 18 . 6/2/2007
-SCREAMS OUT YOUR NAME!-

do you remember me?

yeah...i think i went to sleep for about...4 months? i dno...

lol annways, i didn't actually...i...just, had like fricken 621 fictionpress alerts so i didn't bother going thru all of them but still...OMG

OMG

GOM

GOM

OMG

they meet thy parents! WHE!

that is SO COOL! ...ONCE AGAIN, I AM SO BLOODY SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING EARLIER...*cough* like 3 months earlier *cough*

xKy
northernmoon chapter 20 . 5/29/2007
I remember reading this story ages ago but I guess I lost track of it. I'm so happy to have found it again!

I love your characters so 're the best. I hope we get to see some of Keir's past too.
Kraheera-Raven chapter 20 . 5/29/2007
*hugs* Despite the long wait, it was worth it. I absolutely love this story, it's amazing.
sillylittle-emokid chapter 20 . 5/28/2007
wow pretty intnse...a long wait for this...yet it was slightly an expected result

loved it though

XD

Chaos
haayleyy chapter 19 . 5/28/2007
I LOVE this story. Kier's such a sweetheart! I don't picture Rory off of Gilmore girls as Winter, though. By the way, does Kier know that Winter's real name is Ashlie? Just curious!
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