|Reviews for Final Dance of a Girl|
| TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
wow..yet again another amazin poem...u are an exstrodinary poet...this poem has so much meanin...and insight it to wat most people feel on the inside but dont show on the outside...it like they are fake on the outside...like her smile, but reali cryin on the inside u portray this so well in this poem. also the way this poem ends is so powerful "so open your eyes"...exellent...wen readin this i felt sadness for the person and also alarm..cause you neva reali notice these things until it reali is to late...and this poem shows that so well...the family ignorin her and then they notice her wen she has taken her life...amazin..this poem has great emotion and meanin and symoblisum in it...excellent u are like i said an amazin poet...such a strong poet too...excellent...i find that this is by fair the best 1 u have done...the others are amazin also, but for sum reason i find this 1 to have alittle more feel in it...if that make sence..lol...excellent work on all ur pieces...
~Laurathanks for the review...
| Heamatite chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
i think that this poem shows depth and the humanity of all. it reminds us that no matter how bad thinks get we have to keep going and that we may feel alone in the world but there is always someone. it tells me that i should not bottle my feelings till they lead to something like you for that!