Reviews for Endless Days
noheroine chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
I can relate with this poem. Something about it makes me feel oddly in place, if that makes any sense. I especially love the line, "This is the world that oppresses me."Great work, and... Keep writing! :)
radiojames chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
I love this. just simply that I love it.
TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
wow...yet again another amazingly emotional piece..the way u used repatision in this piece makes it flow reali well...this piece ends well with a strong line "this is my life within my eyes"...just amazin...u are obviously an excellent write with alot of emotion...keep writin..

Laura
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Great poem, flows so well and the short lines work well with the theme and emotion.